STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Egor Alpatov <egroker1 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you very much for your comments and sorry for my inattendance to typos.
 I've updated proceedings accordingly: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Baldin_2023_Proceedings_v2.pdf

Thanks and regards,
Egor

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On Wed, Oct 11, 2023 at 10:15 AM subhash via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Egor,

Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions below for your consideration:

General: please run a spell checker to correct typos.
The X,Y axis labels in figures are quite small, please try to increase
their sizes.
I am not sure if the following text is needed in title "Название статьи"
please check.

abstract:
can be observed --> can be probed
In this talk, we will report --> In these proceedings, we report

l#9: provides an opportunity
l#11: The results of experiment .... have shown that the nature ...
l#18,19:  daughter particle is emitted predominantly in the direction of
its parent spin
l#22: cos theta∗ --> theta^*
l#25: Initial angular momentum direction is expected to be
l#36: was measured in Au+Au collisions at sNN = ....
remove "collision energies";
l#36,37:  successfully described lambda polarization results,
multi-strange species will provide more constraint
l#40: can be _ reconstructed
l#42: Equation 2 to directly measure ...
l#52: you should mention these data collected as part BES-II program
l#57: Then this line can be rephrased like: BESII have new detector
upgrades ...
l#61: with acceptance enhanced by one unit in rapidity
l#65: Pion and proton tracks with momentum .... and used
l#70-72: If you used KFParticle for your analysis, then mention it here
l#73-76: centrality selection part should be moved before track &
particle selection discussion.
l#85,86: I would rephrase: Track efficiency correction has negligible
impact on polarization and hence not applied.
l#91,92: You should define theta_b
l#94: Figure 2 and 3 present ... of _ Ξ
l#95:  daughter's
l#99:  and previous Λ global polarization measurements
l#101:  polarization as a function of collision energy
l#102: together with the same from sNN = ...
l#103:  updated results for new datasets --> can be labelled as BES-II
results
l#114, 115: These results follow a similar trend observed for \Lambda
and consistent ...

Thanks and regards,
Subhash


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