STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Baoshan,

Nicely written proceedings. I have a few suggestions below for your 
consideration:

Title: you might consider adding RHIC or STAR.

Abstract:
-------------------
You can probably re-arrange the sentences (by clubbing similar topics) 
in the abstract so reads smooth. Here is what I would suggest:

After "In this proceeding, we present new measurements of the global 
spin alignment of ϕ mesons using .... √sNN = 200 GeV."
add this following sentence
"The energy-dependent results of ϕ mesons measured with BES-II data are 
consistent with those published in BES-I, with a smaller margin of 
error."
--> The energy-dependent spin alignment for ϕ mesons from BES-II data is 
consistent with that published from BES-I and showcasing a significant 
improvement in precision.

"Concurrently, our new measurement of rapidity dependence exhibits a 
trend in line with theoretical predictions."
--> We performed a new measurement assessing the rapidity dependence of 
phi meson \rho_00, and our findings are consistent with theoretical 
predictions.

Then add:
"The global spin alignment of J/ψ mesons aligns with a value of 1/3 
within the statistical error."
--> The global spin alignment of J/ψ mesons with respect to first order 
event plane aligns with a value of 1/3 within the statistical error.

Then add:
"Additionally, we provide a brief introduction to the study of the 
global spin alignment of ρ0 mesons" & "We discuss our procedure to 
measure the global spin alignment of ρ
0 mesons and offer predictions for measurement errors." can be combined:
--> Additionally, we discuss the procedure of measuring the global spin 
alignment of ρ0 mesons at RHIC and provide the projection for errors.


"In this proceeding" --> In these proceedings,
"a center-of-mass energy of" --> can be be removed
"global spin alignment of ϕ mesons using BES-II data" --> global spin 
alignment (\rho_00) of ϕ mesons using BES-II data


1 Introduction
-------------------
"This angular momentum gives rise to a vorticity field within the 
system."
--> This angular momentum results in the formation of a vorticity field 
within the system.

"provides valuable insights "
--> can provide valuable insights


2 Analysis method
-------------------
"using embedding technology"
--> using embedding technique


3 Results
-------------------
"Notably, there was no significant difference observed in the physics 
contribution concerning the participant plane and spectator plane"
--> I think EP decorrelation correction needed to mentioned. How about:
Notably, there was no significant difference observed in the physics 
contribution concerning the participant plane and spectator plane, when 
the decorrelation effect in event plane is taken into consideration.

" This observed phenomenon may be attributed to larger fluctuations in 
the direction perpendicular to the motion direction"
--> Do you mean larger fluctuation in transverse direction than in 
longitudinal?

"first-order event plane of isobars at 200 GeV"
--> first-order event plane in isobars collisions at sNN = 200 GeV

"RuRu" --> Ru+Ru
"ZrZr" --> Zr+Zr
"AuAu" --> Au+Au


4 Summary
-------------------
"In this study," --> In these proceedings,

" The J/ψ global spin alignment" -->  The J/ψ global spin alignment with 
respect to first order event plane


Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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