STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Xiaoyu,

Very nicely written proceedings. I have only a few minor suggestions for 
your consideration:

cosmetics comment:
figure 8: there seems some additional border lines across the figures, 
please update with a figure from repository.
please include latex line numbers

Abstract:
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"= 27and19.6 GeV" --> Add a space

1 Introduction
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"with respect to the participant plane." --> with respect to the 
reaction plane.
"The first order flow" --> The first order flow coefficient


3 Flow measurement at fix-target energies
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"with a mean filed potential" --> with a mean field potential
"scaling breaks at y < 0.5." --> scaling breaks at y > 0.5.

4 Summary
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"scaling at y > 0.5" --> scaling at y < 0.5
"production of light nuclei comes from coalescence."
--> light nuclei are likely produced by coalescence mechanism.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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