STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Shengli,

Thanks for the updated version. I have a few suggestions below for your 
consideration:

l#6: In these proceedings,
l#7: in 200 GeV in 16^O+16^O collisions ...
L#12-3: How about? Furthermore, the measurements of anisotropies in γ+Au 
collisions are also discussed.
l#28: covers the pseudo-rapidity range around |η| <= 1.5
l#32:  in different centralities.
l#46-47: The methods differ from each other in terms of how the scale 
factor f is estimated
l#48: Systematic uncertainties account for the variations among the four 
methods.
l#54-55: "As shown in panel (a) ... is smaller than that from
l#56: However, the values of v3(pT) shown in panel (b) are similar among 
the three small systems.
l$56-57: It is consistent with the initial geometry predicted by Glauber 
model calculations, which include sub-nucleon fluctuations. In such a 
model, ...
l#61: Protons and neutrons can organize themselves into sub-group ....
l#64: forming an alpha cluster
l#74: 74 K \times v2{4}
l#90: in 0-10% 16^O+16^O collisions at sNN = 200 GeV ...

I sign off with these addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash




On 2023-12-05 10:18 PM, Shengli Huang wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>     It is four pages now.
>
> Thanks!
> Shengli
>
> On Mon, Dec 4, 2023 at 9:14 PM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Dear Shengli,
> >
> > Thanks for posting your proceedings. Could you please shorten it to
> > fit
> > 4 page limit including references.
> >
> > With regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2023-12-04 11:30 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> > >
> > > Shengli Huang (shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu) has submitted a
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> > > for a
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