STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Priyanshi,

Nice proceedings. I have only a few suggestions below for your 
consideration:

l#12: The objective of relativistic heavy-ion collisions is to ...
l#15: comprehending the early stages of collisions.
l#17: may be: These collisions effectively minimize the background
l#27: is highlighted.
l#31: involving two isobar species
l#44: In these proceedings,
(to my understanding proceedings means a collection of papers)
l#47:  650 million events out of 2 billion ...  in each isobaric 
collision scenarios.
(so that it doesn't make an impression that we collect only 650M)
l#49, 54: mention branching ratio, otherwise it is not clear what these 
numbers are. Also add citation of PDG.
l#92: v_{2}Cu


I sign off with these are addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-12-19 01:25 AM, psinha via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Zhenyu,
>
> Kindly find a version include line numbers at the same link.
> The deadline for submission is 31st December 2023.
>
> Regards,
> Priyanshi
>
>
> On 2023-12-18 21:00, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
> > originally
> > submitted by Priyanshi Sinha ( 
> > priyanshisinha AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in )
> > at
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2022/Azimuthal-anisotropy-strange-and-multi-strange-hadrons-isobar-collisions--1
> >
> > Comment:
> > Hi Priyanshi,
> > Could you kindly provide a version with line numbers? Thx.
> > Also could you remind us what the deadline is? I am just a bit 
> > surprised to
> > see proceeding at end of 2023 for a 2022 Fall conference :)
> >
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