STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
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Comment:
Nice slide!! I sign off with the following comments.
Minor typos on slide #5 and #6: "parity-violating weak decays channel" -->  
"parity-violating weak decay channel"
Minor rephrasing on Slide#12: "Global polarization collision system size  
dependence?" --> Collision system size dependence of global polarization?"
Slide#15: "to the produce timing" -> "to earlier production"
Slide#18: "New developments, Shear Induced Polarization(SIP), trend can  
describe data" --> "New developments, shear induced polarization(SIP), can  
describe trend of data"
Slide#19 & 20: The two bullets are a bit contradictory. Say "No significant  
system size dependence observed at same energy"
Slide#20: "obvious" --> "apparent" or write "No significant collision energy  
dependence"
Slide#22: "peripheral" --> "peripheral collisions"
Slide#23: "third-order event" --> "third-order event plane"




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