STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Comment:
Nice slides. I sign off with some comments:

Slide#2: Somewhere we have to mention nonflow. How about "Longitudinal  
decorrelation & nonflow"

Also, add: "O+O and new d+Au data" if you can

Slide#3:
"degree of freedom" --> "degrees of freedom"
"space non-uniformity" --> "spatial non-uniformity"
remove "in thermal equilibrium"

Slide#6 & 7 (needs some clarity of conclusion):
Slide#6: Add something like: "He+Au" is predicted to have largest triangular  
flow in nucleon geometry"
Slide#6: Add a sentence about O+O because you're introducing O+O results on  
next slide.

Slide#7: No evidence of larger triangular flow in He+Au than O+O, p+Au, d+Au

Slide#9: Add a statement about "nonflow", say "wider coverage, help suppress  
nonflow"

Slide#11: New plot looks good, say consistent results between run. Also, add  
"STAR results are robust with \eta-gap change"

Slide#14: Add a sentence about v3 is "H+Au is similar to O+O and other  
systems indicating no nucleon scale geometry transmutation"




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