STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Achyut Khanal ( hp4820 AT wayne.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/AUM-2024/Longitudinal-flow-plane-decorrelation-multiple-plane-cumulants-STAR

Comment:
Nice poster. I sign off with a few comments.

Main comment: this is the first time you're showing these results -- you have 
 
to request for preliminary. Once you've produced a revised version, please do 
 
make a preliminary request.

Every plot should have "STAR Preliminary" label

The labels inside each plot are too small


noble cumulant -- >novel cumulant

(de)correlation by correlating  --> (de)correlation by studying

estimate of the possible systematic variation --> estimate of the possible  
systematic change

gDCA is a STAR terminology with "g" referring to global track, please use  
"DCA", better spell it out, same also for "nHitsFit"
it's better to avoid STAR specific terminologies

The track cuts written in the text and in the yellow box inside the STAR  
detector pictures do not agree, remove the cuts inside yellow box

"STAR detector offers uniform acceptance" --> "STAR detector offers wide  
pseudorapidity acceptance"











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