STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Yicheng Feng ( feng216 AT purdue.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2024/Overview-STAR-Measurements-FlowChiralityVorticity

Comment:
Dear Yicheng,

Thanks for preparing the nice abstract and congratulations for this overview  
talk.
I sign-off with the following suggestions for your consideration, mostly  
re-arranging sentences:

Generally, after the 1st line, you can discuss physics lines, e.g:  
"Measurements of anisotropic flow will be pertinent to the QCD matter phase  
diagram. Global angular momentum and anisotropic flow each can generate  
vorticity in QCD matter, leading to the polarization of hyperons. The strong  
magnetic field created by ... the chiral magnetic effect."

Then say,
"In this talk, we will present the above measurements by STAR experiment  
related to flow, chirality, and vorticity, which probe the QCD matter created 
 
in these collisions."

IMO, in this way it would read a bit smoother.

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