STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Tong Fu ( futong626 AT mail.sdu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/8th-International-Conference-Chirality-Vorticity-and-Magnetic-Field-Quantum-Matter/M-1

Comment:
Dear Tong, Nice slides. I have a few suggestions for your consideration:
s#2: You can consider making bullets based on physics or observables. The  
bullets 3-4 can be under local polarization.s#3: first bullet, you can add  
initial in front of L and B.s#4: Fastest VVorticity --> Strongest  
Vorticity.add a space between energy and GeV, 2.76 TeV.late-state magnetic  
field --> late-stage magnetic field.s#5: I suggest removing (𝑃𝑧 and  
spin Hell effect)).Events --> Either accepted events or analyzed good  
events.s#7: We don't need the second bullet.s#9: Au+Au"First time to measure  
them with BES energies" --> Measurements extended to BES energies.s#10: Both  
the local polarizations P2y and P2z will be affected by Shear induced  
polarization, I would suggest not to be specify P2y for shear; You can change 
 
it like simply local polarization. BTW, this slides fit better in  
introduction to local spin polarization, then you can discuss the  
results.s#11: Same as above, please label it as local polarization not  
results of shear; Shear, vorticity, chemical potential all effects can  
contribute to P2ys#13: you can probably mention hints of sign change here.

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