STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Han-Sheng Li ( li3924 AT purdue.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/8th-International-Conference-Chirality-Vorticity-and-Magnetic-Field-Quantum-Matter/E-0

Comment:
Dear Han-Sheng,

Nice slides. I have a few suggestions for your consideration:

s#3: you can consider adding reference to \gamma correlator.
s#5: Run 2011+2014+2016
s#5 & 6: We probably don't need to include systematic error sources inside  
Figure or as a slide. You can keep it as a back up slide.
s#7:  v2 nonflow --> v_2
"The intercept is about 1.5𝜎 significance" --> The intercept has a  
significance of about 1.5𝜎
"ZDC does not have non-flow effect, but low statistic" --> ZDC significantly  
suppress non-flow effects but poor event plane resolution
s#8: bullets: please add units for invariant mass
s#9: Do we expect larger signal at low mass region, can you add a statement  
on that?

A few general cosmetic suggestions add a space 200 GeV; v_2


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