STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Feng, Yicheng" <feng216 AT purdue.edu>]

Hi Prithwish, 

Thank you for your comments and sign-off. 

I have implemented all your comments and uploaded the revised slides to the same drupal node: 

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2024/Overview-STAR-measurements-flow-chirality-and-vorticity

Sincerely,

Yicheng

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Hi Yicheng,
   Nice slides. Please consider some minor text suggestions. I sign off
with these implemented.
Note that the audience for this talk would be a bit diverse, so try
spelling things out.

Slide#6:
Somewhere after first bullet add "v1 slope: ..."
"Mean field model predicts" --> "Mean field models predict"


Slide#7:
"hadron flows follow" --> "hadrons follow"

Slide#9:
After "with high precision" consider adding "(improved statistics &
event plane resolution)"

Slide#12:
Title, how about "CME signal extraction: SP/PP comparison method"
"to those two planes" --> "SP & PP"

Slide#13:
Title, how about "The isobar experiment" --> "The isobar collision: CME
upper limit"

Summary:
consider revising:
"STAR continues producing results of great impact for important physics
on QCD"
-->
"STAR continues producing impactful results covering key aspects of hot
QCD"

Edit the next line to something like this:
"this talk focuses on recent studies related to flow, vorticity, and
chirality"
-->
"This talk focuses on selected recent studies on flow, vorticity, and
chirality, amid numerous other key findings"

Overall, nice and forward looking, along with STAR BUR it would be good
add the Hot & town hall meeting
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Best,
Prithwish


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> Comment:
> Dear Yicheng,
>
> Nice slides. I am signing off and pushing it to star talks with a few
> minor
> suggestions:
>
> s#6: flat scale --> scales or scales with y/y_beam ...
> deviate --> deviate from scaling
>
> Since we don't have model for higher energies here, I think we can
> remove
> "but higher → data to constraint model EOS".
> I was wondering does the "baryon inhomogeneities" paper has any
> connection
> with this excess proton v1, if not we can remove it from the footer?
>
> s#7: may be rephrased to something like gradual breaking of NCQ scaling
>
> s#9: updates from BES-II
>
>
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