STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chunjian Zhang <czhang.phys AT gmail.com>]

Hi Subhash and Richard, 

Thank you for the insightful comments. I rephrased the sentences based on your valuable comments. The updated draft can be found at https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/NN2024/Imaging-collective-structure-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR-

Please let me know if you have further useful comments.

Best regards,

Chunjian 

On Tue, Sep 3, 2024 at 10:02 AM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by ChunJian Zhang ( chunjianzhang AT fudan.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/NN2024/Imaging-collective-structure-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR-

Comment:
Dear Chunjian,
Nicely written proceedings. I have a few suggestions for your consideration:

Abstract:How about "initial conditions, influenced by the nuclear structure 
of colliding ions" --> initial conditions, where the nuclear structure of the 
colliding ions plays a significant role."collisions of 96Ru and 96Zr" 
--> collisions of 96Ru+96Ru and 96Zr+96Zr

l#36-47: "As shown in the talk" --> As discussed in [5, 6] ..."the signals 
of ...are much enhanced ... Au+Au" --> the signals of ... and ... in most 
central U+U collisions are enhanced compared to that in Au+Au 
collisions."These two systems’ A are nearly same but with completely 
different atomic shapes." --> These two systems have nearly the same mass 
number (A) but completely different atomic shapes, with 197Au nuclei having a 
slightly oblate shape (8)."Final state effects ... from initial conditions." 
--> As a result, taking ratios between these two collision systems almost 
completely cancels out final state effects, leaving model uncertainties 
primarily due to initial conditions."results from Au+Au remain positive 
throughout" --> "results from Au+Au remain positive throughout the 
centralities"
l#48-63: 
"the measurements provide capability" --> these measurements provide 
capability"The results are remarkably consistent with that low energy 
measurement with confirming that  the 238U are largely deformed " --> The 
results are remarkably consistent with that of the low-energy measurement, 
confirming that 238U is largely deformed.
l#64-75:the final state ....canceled .... --> the final state effects are 
completely canceled by taking ratios. "ratio of any observable must be due 
to differences " --> To be precise we write above observables or 
flow-correlation observables instead of any observables (?)
l#90-108:
At present ....hampered --> Currently, quantitative evaluations of 
longitudinal fluctuations are still limited.

I sign-off with these addressed.

---
If you have any problems with the review process, please contact 
webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov