STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Sharang Rav Sharma (  
sharang.rav AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/68th-DAE-SYMPOSIUM-NUCLEAR-PHYSICS/Measurement-directed-flow-high-baryon-density-regio

Comment:
Dear Sharang,

Nice proceedings. I have a few suggestions below.

Please include line numbers.

Introduction:
"At these energies, --> "At these lower energies,

"This leads to a significant influence .... flow harmonics" --> This results  
in a significant influence of the shadowing effect, where passing spectator  
nucleons obstruct the interaction region, thereby affecting the measured flow 
 
observables.

net-kaon, net-proton --> you could add definition for net-kaon and  
net-proton, either here or in next section. It is not a particle itself, but  
constructed from particle and antiparticle's v1.

= 3.2 – 4.5 GeV --> Specify each beam energies reported

Analysis Details:
"Mass-squared (m2)" --> Moreover, mass-squared (m2) information from TOF

"The reaction plane angle is estimated by the event plane method using Event  
Plane Detector (EPD) within" --> The event plane angle, a proxy for the  
reaction plane angle, is reconstructed using the Event Plane Detector (EPD),  
which has coverage ...

"3 eta sub-events" --> 3 η-sub events, (also indicate the sub-event ranges)

Results:
"with increasing rapidity for all particle" --> with increasing rapidity for  
all particles
"is attributed" --> can be attributed

"The net-kaon dv1/dy .... 19.6 GeV" --> The net-kaon dv1dy trend shows a  
minimum between sqrt{s_{NN}} = 4.5 and 7.7 GeV, which happens at lower  
collision energies than for net-protons, where the minimum is found between  
sqrt{s_{NN}} = 11.5 and 19.6 GeV [7].

Reference [7] and [1] is same, please correct it

I sign off with these addressed.

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