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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review
- From: vipul <vipul AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
- To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
- Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review
- Date: Mon, 30 Sep 2024 07:52:04 +0530
Dear Conveners,
Please let me know if you have comments and suggestions on the proceedings.
If not, please sign off the proceedings.
Thanks,
With Regards,
Vipul
On 2024-09-27 12:36, vipul wrote:
Dear Richard,
Please let me know if there is more comments and suggestions on the proceedings.
Thanks,
With Regards,
Vipul
On 2024-09-25 20:18, vipul wrote:
Dear Richard,
Thank you very much for your comments and nice suggestions.
I have modified the proceedings with these.
Please find updated version in the following link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Proceedings_STARflowHighlights_v1.pdf
Yes, there is a limit on pages (between 3-10) but not exactly 6,
therefore I have added all the required references.
Thanks,
With Regards,
Vipul
On 2024-09-25 03:10, Richard Seto wrote:
Vipuli,
Nice comprehensinve proceedings.
Most of the correction are grammar and wording, expect for an
important change in the v_3 physics (indicated below)
P1 column 2. "The observed phase transistion...." ->
"Lattice QCD calculations indicate that the phase transition in the
low mu_B region is a smooth crossover at Tc of about 150 MeV [give the
reference]. In the high mu_B region of the QCD phase diagram, the
transition is expected to be first order ending at a critical end
point as one progresses to lower mu_B [give a reference]. An
expected...."
Maybe you can get away with not referencing the Lattice(low mu_B) and
analytical (high mu_B) calculations if reference 2 gives those
references. Are you limitted to 6 pages. I will assume that you are.
P2
"the" after "explore" so it says "explore the QCD...."
Even though you are low on space, you need to give a reference for
BESII. You can probablty get away with nor referencing BES I, if your
reference to BES II references BES I. You showd reference NA61 etc -
but you don't have room. Hopefullyreference 2 has those and you can
get away with it.
Section 2.
You can shorten the first paragraph to save space, if that helps. Here
is a suggestion:
"RICH is a highly versatile collider, capable of colliding various
nuclear species (U, Au, Ru, Zr, Cu, Al, O, He3 and d) and protons, at
energies between 7.7 GeV and 200 GeV center of mass, and from 3.0 to
7.7 GeV in fixed-target mode."
Bottom of column 1
"Following a major upgrade, STAR provides full azimulthal coverage
over a wide range in rapidity as depicted in Fugure 2. Large...."
secction 3
par 1, line 7, "as [5]" -> "[5]"
P4
For the faraday effect use [11]. For the transported quark effect you
should probably reference the arXiv: https://arxiv.org/abs/2304.02831
[1] since it has not been published yet.
4.3
This is a very important major correction to correct the physics
message:
"An initial triangular shape in the initial geometry will result in a
triangular flow v_3. This triangular shape, at higher energies, is
attributed to even-by-event fluctuations in the positions of the
participating nucleons, and is uncorrelated to the initial reaction
plane PSI_1. At lower energies (sqrt_sNN=3 GeV) a triagular flow
correlated to the reaction plane is clearly seen as shown in figure 4,
indicating that the triagular shape arises from dynamical effects due
to stopping, the passing time of the spectators and the expansion of
the fireball. The values of....."
-Rich
Richard Seto
richard.seto AT ucr.edu
Department of Physics and Astronomy
University of California, Riverside
Riverside, CA 92521
On Sep 22, 2024, at 9:33 AM, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Vipul Bairathi (vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com) has submitted a material
for a
review, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68996
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
Richard Seto, 09/24/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
vipul, 09/25/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
vipul, 09/27/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
vipul, 09/29/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
vipul, 09/29/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
vipul, 09/27/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
vipul, 09/25/2024
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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Vipul Bairathi for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review,
Richard Seto, 09/24/2024
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