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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Sharang Rav Sharma (  
sharang.rav AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Anisotropic-flow-correlated-first-order-and-higher-order-event-plane

Comment:
Dear PAs,

Nice abstract, but this one is a bit challenging, especially combining  
messages from v1, v2, v3. Let me offer a few thoughts:
We could shorten it a bit, following details can be removed, " At low  
collision energies, the particle production time is comparable to the transit 
 
time of the colliding nuclei, resulting in substantial spectator  
shadowing effect that significantly impact the measured flow observables."
l#22: remove "(Ψr)"
l#23: "However, recent low-energy measurements reveal a non-zero correlation  
between v3 and the first order event plane angle (Ψ1), which acts as a proxy 
 
for Ψr." --> can be rephrased to something like, "non-zero correlation  
between v3 and the first order event plane angle (Ψ1) reveals ...."
l#25: "Ψ1 correlated v1{Ψ1} and v3{Ψ1}" -->  v1{Ψ1} and v3{Ψ1}l#26, 27: 
 
remove: " taken in fixed-target mode at STAR."l#29: "compare these results  
with previous findings from the PHOBOS experiment" -->Â compare with previous 
 
findings from PHOBOS. 

l#30: "The experimental ... into the underlying physics mechanisms." is too  
generic. Probably you could say a common message, like these results will  
provide insights into initial conditions and transport parameters. You can  
probably adjust the sentences in the first paragraph to make room for it.

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