STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[XIATONG WU <maxwoo AT physics.ucla.edu>]

Hi Prithwish, 

Thank you for the detailed feedback and comments. I have updated the abstract accordingly and uploaded a version 2 on Drupal. The current word count is 310, which should be well below the limit 350. 

Best,

Xiatong

On Sun, Nov 3, 2024 at 7:53 PM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
submitted by Xiatong Wu ( maxwoo AT ucla.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Probing-Electromagnetic-field-Effects-and-Coalescence-Dynamics-using

Comment:
Nice abstract!! Please see my comments below:

Overall it's a bit too long, need to shorten it a bit.

"The presence of an electromagnetic field is a crucial property of the 
quark-gluon plasma (QGP) produced in heavy-ion collisions."  (sentence is 
incorrect)
-->
"Investigating the presence of an electromagnetic (EM) field in the 
quark-gluon plasma (QGP) has gained significant interest in heavy-ion 
collision studies"


"It provides the foundation for possible chiral magnetic effect (CME) and 
probes the electrical conductivity of the deconfined matter. " (EM-field does 
not probe -- revise)
-->
"The EM field is a prerequisite for observing the chiral magnetic effect 
(CME) and could offer insight into the QGP's conductivity."


"splitting between the directed flows" --> "splitting between their directed 
flows"

"of particles and anti-particles through coalescence" -->"and eventually 
between particles and anti-particles"

line 15:
move this part "consistent with the presence of electromagnetic-field effects 
dominated by Faraday induction and Coulomb effect." to the end of para where
you say at one place about EM-field

line 19:
"The measured $\Lambda^0 (\bar{\Lambda}^0) \Delta \left( \frac{dv_1}{dy} 
\right)_{\Lambda^0 (\bar{\Lambda}^0)}$ is consistent with the difference 
between $p (\bar{p})$ and $K^{\pm} \Delta \left( \frac{dv_1}{dy} 
\right)_{K^{\pm}}$ as expected in the coalescence picture."
-->
"The measured $\Lambda^0 (\bar{\Lambda}^0) \Delta \left( \frac{dv_1}{dy} 
\right)$ is compared with the $p (\bar{p}) \Delta \left( \frac{dv_1}{dy} 
\right)$ and the difference between $p (\bar{p}) \Delta \left( 
\frac{dv_1}{dy} \right)$ and $K \Delta \left( \frac{dv_1}{dy} \right)$, 
motivated by the coalescence picture."

Remove line 20 starting with "Although Λ0(¯Λ0)...", instead add something 
like this:
We discuss our measurement with the expectations of EM-field effect, in 
particular the dominance of Faraday induction and Coulomb effect.







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