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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Sharang Rav Sharma for Quark Matter 2025 got commented by Subhash Singha
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- Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Sharang Rav Sharma for Quark Matter 2025 got commented by Subhash Singha
- Date: Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:06:35 +0530
Dear convenors,
I am sharing the updated version of merged abstract after incorporating suggestions from Richard and Subhash.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Anisotropic-flow-correlated-first-order-and-higher-order-event-plane
Kindly let me know if you have any further comments or suggestions.
Thanks and regards,
Sharang Rav Sharma
On 2024-10-30 19:14, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material
originally submitted by Sharang Rav Sharma (
sharang.rav AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Anisotropic-flow-correlated-first-order-and-higher-order-event-plane
Comment:
Dear PAs,
Nice abstract, but this one is a bit challenging, especially combining
messages from v1, v2, v3. Let me offer a few thoughts:
We could shorten it a bit, following details can be removed, " At low
collision energies, the particle production time is comparable to the transit
time of the colliding nuclei, resulting in substantial spectator
shadowing effect that significantly impact the measured flow observables."
l#22: remove "(Ψr)"
l#23: "However, recent low-energy measurements reveal a non-zero correlation
between v3 and the first order event plane angle (Ψ1), which acts as a proxy
for Ψr." --> can be rephrased to something like, "non-zero correlation
between v3 and the first order event plane angle (Ψ1) reveals ...."
l#25: "Ψ1 correlated v1{Ψ1} and v3{Ψ1}" --> v1{Ψ1} and v3{Ψ1}l#26, 27:
remove: " taken in fixed-target mode at STAR."l#29: "compare these results
with previous findings from the PHOBOS experiment" -->Â compare with previous
findings from PHOBOS.Â
l#30: "The experimental ... into the underlying physics mechanisms." is too
generic. Probably you could say a common message, like these results will
provide insights into initial conditions and transport parameters. You can
probably adjust the sentences in the first paragraph to make room for it.
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