STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>]

Dear Suhash,
The comments are shown as follow:

REVIEWER 1:
Three minor corrections are proposed:

In "3 Results and discussion":
- please use plural so it reads: "Upper limits on the late-stage..."
- in order to make sure the footnote tag is not at the beginning of the line, 
either locate it just after "-P^{net}_{2,y}" or remove "The" at the beginning 
of the former sentence so it simply reads "... dependence. Left and right 
panels...".

References: (only initial should be used instead of full first name)
- reference [5] should read "J.~Chen et al, arXiv:2407.02935[nucl-ex].

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REVIEWER 2:
Figures :
*** The figures are very small. They can be enlarged, and the captions can be 
moved below the figures. 
*** Fig. 1: in caption and on axis: ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩obs; in the text: ⟨Pz 
sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩ (without „obs”) 
*** Fig. 2: not clear how P_y [%] was obtained; previoulsy <p_y> used; the 
same concerns P_H [%] and quantities in Figs. 3 and 4 
*** Fig. 2 labels (if change possible): [%] → (%) Energy [GeV] → 
\sqrt{s_{NN}} (GeV) *** Captions of Figs. 2, 3, 4: Vertical line → Vertical 
lines

Extra comments:
*** abstract: 7.7 - 27 GeV → 7.7 -- 27 GeV ** P2,z (Λ̄ ⟩) → P2,z (Λ̄ ) ⟩ 
(averaging at the end) 
*** line after Eq. (2): ϕ*_p was already defined (page 1) 
** next line: ⟨(cosθ∗_p )^2⟩ should be probably (cosθ∗_p )^2; meaning of 
⟨...⟩ should be explained 
*** 2nd line before Sec. 2: Pnet2,y,z had different notation (mean difference 
vs. difference of means) than in abstract → should be unified 
*** Sec. 2: In these proceedings, we analyzed → In these proceedings, we 
present/report 
*** 19.6 and 27 GeV → 19.6, and 27 GeV ** Time of Projection Chamber → Time 
Projection Chamber ** Pz was not defined 
*** invariant mass as shown → invariant mass (M_inv) as shown 
*** two notations used: „sig” and „Sig” 
*** Sec. 3: panels of Fig. 2 present → panels of Fig. \ref{...} present 
*** The whole paper, including figures and figure captions: please try to 
unify the notations; the reader may be a bit lost by different notations, for 
example: <p2,y>, P2,y, P2,y (%) 
*** page 2, footnote: Pnet2,y has a different notation than in the abstract 
*** page 4: Acknowledgement → Acknowledgements (?) 
*** Order of references: Ref. [6] should go after Ref. [9]


Based on the above comments, I updated the errors and plots.

Best regards,

Qiang Hu

&gt; -----原始邮件-----
&gt; 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
&gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-15 17:27:05 (星期五)
&gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
&gt; 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
&gt; 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 
submitted for review
&gt; 
&gt; Dear Qiang,
&gt; 
&gt; I believe these are updated proceedings after incorporating referee's 
&gt; comments. Could you please share what are the comments from referee(s) 
&gt; and major modifications here?
&gt; 
&gt; Thanks and regards,
&gt; Subhash
&gt; 
&gt; On 2024-11-15 04:47 PM, 胡强 wrote:
&gt; &gt; Dear Conveners,
&gt; &gt; Could you please have a look of my SQM-2024 proceedings?
&gt; &gt; It can be found from the link: 
&gt; &gt; https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Best regards,
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Qiang Hu
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; &gt; -----原始邮件-----
&gt; &gt; &gt; 发件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
&gt; &gt; &gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-01 16:49:14 (星期五)
&gt; &gt; &gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
&gt; &gt; &gt; 抄送:
&gt; &gt; &gt; 主题: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024
&gt; &gt; submitted for review
&gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
&gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; Qiang Hu (qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted a material for a
&gt; &gt; review, please
&gt; &gt; &gt; have a look:
&gt; &gt; &gt; https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
&gt; &gt; &gt;
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