STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Qiang,

Thanks for sharing. I have one additional suggestion: as suggested by 
referee, please unify the notation for example use either <P_{2,y}> or 
P_{2, y}  same for P2z across the proceedings, including figures (Y-axis 
labels), main text,  footnote etc. I am good otherwise

Thanks and regards,
Subhash



On 2024-11-16 09:38 AM, 胡强 wrote:
> Dear Suhash,
> The comments are shown as follow:
>
> REVIEWER 1:
> Three minor corrections are proposed:
>
> In "3 Results and discussion":
> - please use plural so it reads: "Upper limits on the late-stage..."
> - in order to make sure the footnote tag is not at the beginning of
> the line, either locate it just after "-P^{net}_{2,y}" or remove "The"
> at the beginning of the former sentence so it simply reads "...
> dependence. Left and right panels...".
>
> References: (only initial should be used instead of full first name)
> - reference [5] should read "J.~Chen et al, arXiv:2407.02935[nucl-ex].
>
> -----------
> REVIEWER 2:
> Figures :
> *** The figures are very small. They can be enlarged, and the captions
> can be moved below the figures.
> *** Fig. 1: in caption and on axis: ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩obs; in the text:
> ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩ (without „obs”)
> *** Fig. 2: not clear how P_y [%] was obtained; previoulsy <p_y> used;
> the same concerns P_H [%] and quantities in Figs. 3 and 4
> *** Fig. 2 labels (if change possible): [%] → (%) Energy [GeV] →
> \sqrt{s_{NN}} (GeV) *** Captions of Figs. 2, 3, 4: Vertical line →
> Vertical lines
>
> Extra comments:
> *** abstract: 7.7 - 27 GeV → 7.7 -- 27 GeV ** P2,z (Λ̄ ⟩) → P2,z (Λ̄ )
> ⟩ (averaging at the end)
> *** line after Eq. (2): ϕ*_p was already defined (page 1)
> ** next line: ⟨(cosθ∗_p )^2⟩ should be probably (cosθ∗_p )^2; meaning
> of ⟨...⟩ should be explained
> *** 2nd line before Sec. 2: Pnet2,y,z had different notation (mean
> difference vs. difference of means) than in abstract → should be
> unified
> *** Sec. 2: In these proceedings, we analyzed → In these proceedings,
> we present/report
> *** 19.6 and 27 GeV → 19.6, and 27 GeV ** Time of Projection Chamber →
> Time Projection Chamber ** Pz was not defined
> *** invariant mass as shown → invariant mass (M_inv) as shown
> *** two notations used: „sig” and „Sig”
> *** Sec. 3: panels of Fig. 2 present → panels of Fig. \ref{...} present
> *** The whole paper, including figures and figure captions: please try
> to unify the notations; the reader may be a bit lost by different
> notations, for example: <p2,y>, P2,y, P2,y (%)
> *** page 2, footnote: Pnet2,y has a different notation than in the 
> abstract
> *** page 4: Acknowledgement → Acknowledgements (?)
> *** Order of references: Ref. [6] should go after Ref. [9]
>
>
> Based on the above comments, I updated the errors and plots.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Qiang Hu
>
> &gt; -----原始邮件-----
> &gt; 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> &gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-15 17:27:05 (星期五)
> &gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> &gt; 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> &gt; 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
> SQM-2024 submitted for review
> &gt;
> &gt; Dear Qiang,
> &gt;
> &gt; I believe these are updated proceedings after incorporating 
> referee's
> &gt; comments. Could you please share what are the comments from 
> referee(s)
> &gt; and major modifications here?
> &gt;
> &gt; Thanks and regards,
> &gt; Subhash
> &gt;
> &gt; On 2024-11-15 04:47 PM, 胡强 wrote:
> &gt; &gt; Dear Conveners,
> &gt; &gt; Could you please have a look of my SQM-2024 proceedings?
> &gt; &gt; It can be found from the link:
> &gt; &gt; https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> &gt; &gt;
> &gt; &gt; Best regards,
> &gt; &gt;
> &gt; &gt; Qiang Hu
> &gt; &gt;
> &gt; &gt;
> &gt; &gt; &gt; -----原始邮件-----
> &gt; &gt; &gt; 发件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> &gt; &gt; &gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-01 16:49:14 (星期五)
> &gt; &gt; &gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> &gt; &gt; &gt; 抄送:
> &gt; &gt; &gt; 主题: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for 
> SQM-2024
> &gt; &gt; submitted for review
> &gt; &gt; &gt;
> &gt; &gt; &gt; Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> &gt; &gt; &gt;
> &gt; &gt; &gt; Qiang Hu (qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted a material 
> for a
> &gt; &gt; review, please
> &gt; &gt; &gt; have a look:
> &gt; &gt; &gt; https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> &gt; &gt; &gt;
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