STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>]

Dear Subhash,
Thank you for your nice comments. I have updated the proceedings and uploaded 
to the drupal in the same place. Please be kindly to have a look. 

Best regards,

Qiang Hu


> -----原始邮件-----
&gt; 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
&gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-18 13:56:28 (星期一)
&gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
&gt; 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
&gt; 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 
submitted for review
&gt; 
&gt; Dear Qiang,
&gt; 
&gt; Thanks for sharing. I have one additional suggestion: as suggested by 
&gt; referee, please unify the notation for example use either <p_{2,y}> or 
&gt; P_{2, y}  same for P2z across the proceedings, including figures (Y-axis 
&gt; labels), main text,  footnote etc. I am good otherwise
&gt; 
&gt; Thanks and regards,
&gt; Subhash
&gt; 
&gt; 
&gt; 
&gt; On 2024-11-16 09:38 AM, 胡强 wrote:
&gt; &gt; Dear Suhash,
&gt; &gt; The comments are shown as follow:
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; REVIEWER 1:
&gt; &gt; Three minor corrections are proposed:
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; In "3 Results and discussion":
&gt; &gt; - please use plural so it reads: "Upper limits on the late-stage..."
&gt; &gt; - in order to make sure the footnote tag is not at the beginning of
&gt; &gt; the line, either locate it just after "-P^{net}_{2,y}" or remove 
"The"
&gt; &gt; at the beginning of the former sentence so it simply reads "...
&gt; &gt; dependence. Left and right panels...".
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; References: (only initial should be used instead of full first name)
&gt; &gt; - reference [5] should read "J.~Chen et al, 
arXiv:2407.02935[nucl-ex].
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; -----------
&gt; &gt; REVIEWER 2:
&gt; &gt; Figures :
&gt; &gt; *** The figures are very small. They can be enlarged, and the 
captions
&gt; &gt; can be moved below the figures.
&gt; &gt; *** Fig. 1: in caption and on axis: ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩obs; in the 
text:
&gt; &gt; ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩ (without „obs”)
&gt; &gt; *** Fig. 2: not clear how P_y [%] was obtained; previoulsy <p_y> 
used;
&gt; &gt; the same concerns P_H [%] and quantities in Figs. 3 and 4
&gt; &gt; *** Fig. 2 labels (if change possible): [%] → (%) Energy [GeV] →
&gt; &gt; \sqrt{s_{NN}} (GeV) *** Captions of Figs. 2, 3, 4: Vertical line →
&gt; &gt; Vertical lines
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Extra comments:
&gt; &gt; *** abstract: 7.7 - 27 GeV → 7.7 -- 27 GeV ** P2,z (Λ̄ ⟩) → P2,z 
(Λ̄ )
&gt; &gt; ⟩ (averaging at the end)
&gt; &gt; *** line after Eq. (2): ϕ*_p was already defined (page 1)
&gt; &gt; ** next line: ⟨(cosθ∗_p )^2⟩ should be probably (cosθ∗_p )^2; 
meaning
&gt; &gt; of ⟨...⟩ should be explained
&gt; &gt; *** 2nd line before Sec. 2: Pnet2,y,z had different notation (mean
&gt; &gt; difference vs. difference of means) than in abstract → should be
&gt; &gt; unified
&gt; &gt; *** Sec. 2: In these proceedings, we analyzed → In these 
proceedings,
&gt; &gt; we present/report
&gt; &gt; *** 19.6 and 27 GeV → 19.6, and 27 GeV ** Time of Projection 
Chamber →
&gt; &gt; Time Projection Chamber ** Pz was not defined
&gt; &gt; *** invariant mass as shown → invariant mass (M_inv) as shown
&gt; &gt; *** two notations used: „sig” and „Sig”
&gt; &gt; *** Sec. 3: panels of Fig. 2 present → panels of Fig. \ref{...} 
present
&gt; &gt; *** The whole paper, including figures and figure captions: please 
try
&gt; &gt; to unify the notations; the reader may be a bit lost by different
&gt; &gt; notations, for example: <p2,y>, P2,y, P2,y (%)
&gt; &gt; *** page 2, footnote: Pnet2,y has a different notation than in the 
&gt; &gt; abstract
&gt; &gt; *** page 4: Acknowledgement → Acknowledgements (?)
&gt; &gt; *** Order of references: Ref. [6] should go after Ref. [9]
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Based on the above comments, I updated the errors and plots.
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Best regards,
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Qiang Hu
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; &gt; -----原始邮件-----
&gt; &gt; &gt; 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
&gt; &gt; &gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-15 17:27:05 (星期五)
&gt; &gt; &gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
&gt; &gt; &gt; 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
&gt; &gt; &gt; 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
&gt; &gt; SQM-2024 submitted for review
&gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; Dear Qiang,
&gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; I believe these are updated proceedings after incorporating 
&gt; &gt; referee's
&gt; &gt; &gt; comments. Could you please share what are the comments from 
&gt; &gt; referee(s)
&gt; &gt; &gt; and major modifications here?
&gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; Thanks and regards,
&gt; &gt; &gt; Subhash
&gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; On 2024-11-15 04:47 PM, 胡强 wrote:
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; Dear Conveners,
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; Could you please have a look of my SQM-2024 proceedings?
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; It can be found from the link:
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; Best regards,
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; Qiang Hu
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; -----原始邮件-----
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; 发件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; 发送时间: 2024-11-01 16:49:14 (星期五)
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; 抄送:
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; 主题: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu 
for 
&gt; &gt; SQM-2024
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; submitted for review
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; Qiang Hu (qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted a 
material 
&gt; &gt; for a
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; review, please
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; have a look:
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt;
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; ---
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; If you have any problems with the review process, 
please 
&gt; &gt; contact
&gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; &gt; webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov
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