STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Muhammad Farhan Taseer ( mfarhan_taseer AT yahoo.com )  
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Comment:
Dear Farhan,

Nice slides. I have a few suggestions:

s#1: add the DOE logo with in part supported by ...

s#2:Directed flow results
o - system size dependence (U+U 193 GeV; Au+Au & Zr(Ru)+Zr(Ru) at 200 GeV)
o - beam energy dependence (Au+Au: 7.7 - 19.6 GeV)

(Make similar changes in summary slides, two main bullets system size  
dependence and beam energy dependence)

s#13 & 14: systematic errors are not visible! please use exact same version  
as used in earlier conferences (SQM-2024)

s#21: add STAR preliminary label inside the Figure

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