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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review

From: Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>
To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review
Date: Mon, 25 Nov 2024 20:41:51 -0800

Hi Qiang,
Thanks for sharing. I am good with the changes and sign off

Best,
Sooraj

On Sun, Nov 24, 2024 at 10:13 PM 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn> wrote:

Dear Sooraj,

Please find the attached document.

Best regards,

Qiang Hu

-----原始邮件-----
发件人:"Sooraj Radhakrishnan" <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>
发送时间:2024-11-25 11:29:35 (星期一)
收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
抄送:
主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review

Hi Qiang,
Could you attach your slides here, as the drupal is down currently?

thanks,
Sooraj

On Sun, Nov 24, 2024 at 5:18 PM 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn> wrote:

Dear Sooraj,

Could you be kindly to have a look of my SQM2024 proceedings since it has been updated based on reviewers' comments?
It can be found from the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831

With best regards,

Qiang Hu

> -----Original Messages-----
> From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Sent Time: 2024-11-21 11:22:52 (Thursday)
> To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> Cc: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review
>
> Dear Qiang,
>
> Since you haven't received further suggestions, I pushed it to
> star-talks.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2024-11-18 04:37 PM, 胡强 wrote:
> > Dear Subhash,
> > Thank you for your nice comments. I have updated the proceedings and
> > uploaded to the drupal in the same place. Please be kindly to have a
> > look.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > Qiang Hu
> >
> >
> > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > 发送时间: 2024-11-18 13:56:28 (星期一)
> > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> > > 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
> > SQM-2024 submitted for review
> > >
> > > Dear Qiang,
> > >
> > > Thanks for sharing. I have one additional suggestion: as suggested
> > by
> > > referee, please unify the notation for example use either
> > <p_{2,y}> or
> > > P_{2, y} same for P2z across the proceedings, including figures
> > (Y-axis
> > > labels), main text, footnote etc. I am good otherwise
> > >
> > > Thanks and regards,
> > > Subhash
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > On 2024-11-16 09:38 AM, 胡强 wrote:
> > > > Dear Suhash,
> > > > The comments are shown as follow:
> > > >
> > > > REVIEWER 1:
> > > > Three minor corrections are proposed:
> > > >
> > > > In "3 Results and discussion":
> > > > - please use plural so it reads: "Upper limits on the
> > late-stage..."
> > > > - in order to make sure the footnote tag is not at the
> > beginning of
> > > > the line, either locate it just after "-P^{net}_{2,y}" or
> > remove "The"
> > > > at the beginning of the former sentence so it simply reads
> > "...
> > > > dependence. Left and right panels...".
> > > >
> > > > References: (only initial should be used instead of full
> > first name)
> > > > - reference [5] should read "J.~Chen et al,
> > arXiv:2407.02935[nucl-ex].
> > > >
> > > > -----------
> > > > REVIEWER 2:
> > > > Figures :
> > > > *** The figures are very small. They can be enlarged, and the
> > captions
> > > > can be moved below the figures.
> > > > *** Fig. 1: in caption and on axis: ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩obs; in
> > the text:
> > > > ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩ (without „obs”)
> > > > *** Fig. 2: not clear how P_y [%] was obtained; previoulsy
> > <p_y> used;
> > > > the same concerns P_H [%] and quantities in Figs. 3 and 4
> > > > *** Fig. 2 labels (if change possible): [%] → (%) Energy
> > [GeV] →
> > > > \sqrt{s_{NN}} (GeV) *** Captions of Figs. 2, 3, 4: Vertical
> > line →
> > > > Vertical lines
> > > >
> > > > Extra comments:
> > > > *** abstract: 7.7 - 27 GeV → 7.7 -- 27 GeV ** P2,z (Λ̄ ⟩) →
> > P2,z (Λ̄ )
> > > > ⟩ (averaging at the end)
> > > > *** line after Eq. (2): ϕ*_p was already defined (page 1)
> > > > ** next line: ⟨(cosθ∗_p )^2⟩ should be probably (cosθ∗_p )^2;
> > meaning
> > > > of ⟨...⟩ should be explained
> > > > *** 2nd line before Sec. 2: Pnet2,y,z had different notation
> > (mean
> > > > difference vs. difference of means) than in abstract → should
> > be
> > > > unified
> > > > *** Sec. 2: In these proceedings, we analyzed → In these
> > proceedings,
> > > > we present/report
> > > > *** 19.6 and 27 GeV → 19.6, and 27 GeV ** Time of Projection
> > Chamber →
> > > > Time Projection Chamber ** Pz was not defined
> > > > *** invariant mass as shown → invariant mass (M_inv) as shown
> > > > *** two notations used: „sig” and „Sig”
> > > > *** Sec. 3: panels of Fig. 2 present → panels of Fig.
> > \ref{...} present
> > > > *** The whole paper, including figures and figure captions:
> > please try
> > > > to unify the notations; the reader may be a bit lost by
> > different
> > > > notations, for example: <p2,y>, P2,y, P2,y (%)
> > > > *** page 2, footnote: Pnet2,y has a different notation than
> > in the
> > > > abstract
> > > > *** page 4: Acknowledgement → Acknowledgements (?)
> > > > *** Order of references: Ref. [6] should go after Ref. [9]
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Based on the above comments, I updated the errors and plots.
> > > >
> > > > Best regards,
> > > >
> > > > Qiang Hu
> > > >
> > > > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > > > 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > > > 发送时间: 2024-11-15 17:27:05 (星期五)
> > > > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > > > 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> > > > > 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu
> > for
> > > > SQM-2024 submitted for review
> > > > >
> > > > > Dear Qiang,
> > > > >
> > > > > I believe these are updated proceedings after
> > incorporating
> > > > referee's
> > > > > comments. Could you please share what are the comments
> > from
> > > > referee(s)
> > > > > and major modifications here?
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks and regards,
> > > > > Subhash
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2024-11-15 04:47 PM, 胡强 wrote:
> > > > > > Dear Conveners,
> > > > > > Could you please have a look of my SQM-2024
> > proceedings?
> > > > > > It can be found from the link:
> > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Best regards,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Qiang Hu
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > > > > > 发件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > > > > > 发送时间: 2024-11-01 16:49:14 (星期五)
> > > > > > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > > > > > 抄送:
> > > > > > > 主题: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang
> > Hu for
> > > > SQM-2024
> > > > > > submitted for review
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Qiang Hu (qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted
> > a material
> > > > for a
> > > > > > review, please
> > > > > > > have a look:
> > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > ---
> > > > > > > If you have any problems with the review
> > process, please
> > > > contact
> > > > > > > webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov
> > > >
> > </qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov></p2,y></p_y>
> > </p_{2,y}></qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
</qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>

--

Sooraj Radhakrishnan

Research Scientist,

Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44242

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate
Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
MS70R0319, One Cyclotron Road

Berkeley, CA 94720

Ph: 510-495-2473

Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov

Sooraj Radhakrishnan

Research Scientist,

Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44242

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
MS70R0319, One Cyclotron Road

Berkeley, CA 94720

Ph: 510-495-2473

Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov

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