STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Vipul Bairathi ( vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com ) at
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Comment:
Dear Vipul, Nice proceedings. I sign off with a few suggestions below:

l#21: "The STAR collaboration has generated .... " --> can you rephrase like, 
 
.... The STAR experiment has collected significant data to probe QCD phase  
transitions, ...

l#49: consistent --> constituent

l#101: experimental --> experiment

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