STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Derek,

With one following suggestion, I sign off.

One suggestion on your title:
"Semi-inclusive measurements of 𝝅𝟎+jet and 𝜸𝐝𝐢𝐫+jet in
𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 collisions at the STAR experiment and
their impact on measurements of medium-induced modification"

->
"Semi-inclusive measurements of 𝝅𝟎+jet and 𝜸𝐝𝐢𝐫+jet in
𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 collisions and
their impact on measurements of medium-induced modification at the STAR 
experiment"


Best of luck for your thesis poster presentation.

Regards,
Nihar

On 2022-06-04 03:36, Derek Anderson wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thank you for the feedback! I have implemented your suggestions in the
> version linked to below, and have a few responses in-lined below as
> well.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonPoster_AUM2022.v2.pdf
>
> > Cosmetic suggestion: using these colorful cones at the bottom may
> confuse people as it may indicate also jet cone. So you need to use a
> different style to show "shower shape" by pi0 and gamma.
>
> That's a good point! If I have some time, I'll experiment with some
> other ways of representing this, but -- given the late hour -- I may
> not have the time...
>
> > "Observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening" -> "First
> observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening in heavy-ion
> collisions"
>
> In my implementation, I left out "first" because I don't think that's
> quite true... As has been pointed out, STAR has observed
> medium-induced broadening before (c.f. Alice Ohlson's jet-hadron
> correlations).
>
>  -- Derek
>
> On Wed, Jun 1, 2022 at 11:05 PM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Hello Derek, Please find my comment and suggestions below on your
> > nice presentation slides: It is advised to follow the guidance for
> > using roman vs. italic style of symbols.
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> > Hello Derek,
> >
> > Please find my comment and suggestions below on your nice
> > presentation
> > slides:
> >
> > It is advised to follow the guidance for using roman vs. italic
> > style of
> > symbols.
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> > Note: it should be written as $p$+$p$ and $p$+Au, etc, which is
> > different from the guidance
> >
> > Slide#1
> > I think you could change your title:
> > "Reconstruction of neutral-triggered recoil jets in
> > 𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV 𝒑+𝒑 at the STAR experiment"
> > ->
> > How about
> > "Measurement of semi-inclusive pi0+jet and gamma+jet in p+p
> > collisions
> > at
> > 𝒔 = 𝟐𝟎𝟎 GeV and its impact on heavy-ion measurement in
> > STAR"
> > Or similar to this
> > (Because your p+p analysis is important for drawing conclusion that
> > you
> > show on your last slide; and you can make a link from your title
> > And people can wait until your last slide to know what is that
> > impact)
> >
> > Slide#2:
> > "Direct photon constrains kinematics of recoil jet" It is not clear;
> > can
> > you please elaborate or paraphrase?
> >
> > Slide#3
> > Please mention what are these E_cluster, e_i, and r_i in this TSP
> > formula?
> > Similarly, define all terms in direct photon yield formula below.
> > (People may be interested to know)
> >
> > "E_cluster" -> "cluster" should be roman as it is a label and has no
> >
> > value.
> >
> > Cosmetic suggestion: using these colorful cones at the bottom may
> > confuse people as it may indicate also jet cone. So you need to use
> > a
> > different style to show "shower shape" by pi0 and gamma.
> >
> > Slide#4
> >
> > k_T -> make "T" roman style
> > "- With R = 0.2, 0.5" -> you can add this with upper sentence and
> > remove
> > "-" (Better reading in one go)
> > "UE effects small in 𝑝+ 𝑝" -> "Negligible effect of UE in p+p"
> >
> > It would be better to add one sentence mentioning difference between
> >
> > Pt^reco, Pt^raw, and Pt^ch (which is x-axis in the upper plots). I
> > understand this is difficult in limited space, for audience it is
> > probably good to add.
> >
> > SLide#5
> > "Different q/g fractions, path length distribution" -> I would
> > prefer to
> > drop this. Only upper bullet is Ok (" pi0 and gamma +jet iAA
> > consistent"
> > as you mentioned)
> >
> > "…due to jet shape in vacuum"  -> "… due to vacuum parton shower
> > "
> >
> > "Au+Au suppressed relative to 𝑝+𝑝" -> "R^0.2/0.5 in Au+Au less
> > than that
> > in p+p collisions"
> > "Observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening" -> "First
> > observation of medium-induced intra-jet broadening in heavy-ion
> > collisions"
> >
> > Regards
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-06-02 02:54, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Hi all,
> > >
> > > Apologies for the tardiness on this, but I've been invited to
> > present
> > > a poster virtually at the RHIC/AGS Annual User's Meeting (June 7th
> > -
> > > 10th). The content of the slides is identical to what I presented
> > at
> > > Quark Matter 2022, but pared down to focus on the pp side of the
> > > analysis and the yield ratios. Minor edits to the text here and
> > there
> > > have been made to reflect the narrowing of scope. Comments and
> > > questions are more than welcome!
> > >
> > > Thanks!
> > > Derek
> > >
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