STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Derek,

Congratulations!

As your poster has been approved already, I have only a few suggestions 
on your last slide.

Slide-6:

1) "Different q/g fractions, different recoil path length distributions, 
different spectra shapes"
-> I think, you don't need to repeat here again (already discussed in 
Slide#2).
You could mention the following (your final assessment)
"Very Sensitive measurement; need high statistics for precision 
measurement"

2) I think, including suddenly and without mention any info, right slide 
plot is a bit digression from your p+p measurements' impact on 
"intra-jet broadening".
If you could concentrate only on this topic that could be more precise 
based on your last 5-slides.

I would only keep "Extension of 𝜋0/𝛾dir+jet spectrum analysis to full 
jets (tracks + calorimeter)"
as your next step plan.

With these implemented, I sign off.

And Best of luck for your flash talk.

Thank you
Nihar



On 2022-06-10 22:11, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
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> I was selected as the winner of the AUM poster competition, and was
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> as the poster, but with an additional "summary + next steps" slide.
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