STAR HardProbes PWG

[Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for the comments! I have updated the abstract on the drupal page. I removed the sentense of jet substructure observables being useful for heavy-ions since I noticed that there's a character limit of 1300 and I am slightly over that. I am also not too sure how to include the reference of MultiFold since there doesn't seem to be a place for footnotes on the submission page wordbox.

Best,

Youqi

On Fri, Jun 17, 2022 at 1:07 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Youqi,

My comment and suggestion on your nice abstract can be found below.


Title: "UNFOLDING JET SUBSTRUCTURE OBSERVABLES WITH  MACHINE LEARNING
METHOD IN STAR √s = 200 GEV pp COLLISIONS"
-> "UNFOLDING JET SUBSTRUCTURE OBSERVABLES WITH  MACHINE LEARNING METHOD
AT √s = 200 GEV IN pp COLLISIONS IN STAR"

Line#6_ "       …from a common initial parton …" -> "…from an initial parton…"
Line#8-9: "jet substructure measurements can provide insights into
perturbative evolution of the parton, and  the ensuing non-perturbative
processes." -> "jet substructure measurements in vacuum can provide
insights into the parton evolution and  the ensuing non-perturbative
processes like the fragmentation and hadronization."
Line#18:                MultiFold  -> provide reference of PRL paper.
Line#23: "We will compare the “MultiFolded” spectra of the observables
with the previously published STAR data "  I think  better not to
promise too much at this moment. Otherwise You have good abstract; so my
suggestion would be just to focus on MultiFold Method and procedures
only on data. You can add all these comparison later stage if you will
have.

Besides, you could mention a couple of sentences in the first part of
your abstract on "ML part of unfolding" like why it is useful and
important to adopt, etc? For example before line#12 or 17.


Regards,
Nihar

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