STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Barbara,

Thank you for implementing my last comments.
Please find my additional comments below.

LIne#4: "In ultra-relativistic heavy-ion collisions creation a dense and 
hot medium  … is expected." -> "In ultra-relativistic heavy-ion 
collisions, a dense and hot medium… is created."

Line#5: "…a dense and hot medium with partonic degrees of freedom, 
called the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP),…" -> "…a dense and hot Quantum 
Chromodynamics medium with the color degrees of freedom, called the 
Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP), …" (Here "dense and hot medium" is the QCD 
medium; you mean "color degrees of freedom" here).

Line#12: "…not only…, but help…,respectively." -> The syntax of this 
sentence needs a bit of improvement. Suggestion: use "and" with 
",respectively." in this sentence. Otherwise, use "not only…but…" 
without "respectively" here.


Regards,
Nihar




On 2022-06-20 02:11, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> thank you for your useful comments.
> I've updated the abstract.
> And sorry for multiple posts, the current version is under:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2022/Recent-heavy-flavor-results-STAR
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Sun, Jun 19, 2022 at 4:59 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Barbara,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract on HF measurements.
> >
> > 1_ "…the early stage of heavy-ion ultra-relativistic heavy-ion
> > collisions…" -> "the early stage of ultra-relativistic heavy-ion
> > collisions…"
> > (Here "ultra" is optional you may consider to drop it)
> > 2_ "..the whole medium evolution" -> AT this point you have not
> > introduced yet what is this medium (that is QGP). Hence you may need
> > to
> > introduce the QGP medium before.
> > 3_ "Therefore, …the properties of the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP)
> > produced
> > in these collisions. Please try to introduce QGP before and then 2_
> > should come next.
> > 4_ "Quarkonium studies in p + p and p+Au collisions provide us not
> > only
> > with the necessary baseline for Au+Au collisions, but help to
> > understand
> > the quarkonium production mechanisms and the cold nuclear matter
> > effects, respectively.
> > " -> "On the other hand, the quarkonium measurements in p + p and
> > p+Au
> > collisions not only help to understand their production mechanisms
> > and
> > the cold nuclear matter effects but also set the necessary baseline
> > for
> > Au+Au collisions.
> > 5_ "…production provide us information on transport properties…"
> > ->
> > "…production provide information on the transport properties…"
> > 6_"… degree of the heavy quark thermalization and the
> > hadronization
> > mechanism." -> "the degree of the heavy quark thermalization, and
> > the
> > hadronization mechanism."
> > 7_ "We will show measurements of the J/ψ suppression and elliptic
> > flow
> > in isobar (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV and
> > studies of
> > system size and energy dependence of the J/ψ production." -> I
> > would
> > prefer  to rephrase the sentence something like "The system size and
> >
> > energy dependence of the J/ψ production, and its suppression and
> > elliptic flow in isobar (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr) collisions at √sNN = 200
> > GeV
> > will be discussed."
> > (Just to avoid "we will" again)
> > 8_ "…D_S and Λ_C…" -> " …D_S, and Λ_C…"
> > 9_ cross section -> cross-section
> > 10_ "…will be also reported." -> "…will also be reported."
> > 11_"We will also present the first measurements of…" -> "The first
> >
> > measurements of…200 GeV will be presented."
> > 12_ At the end you may consider to include STAR's plan for
> > heavy-flavor
> > measurement in upcoming (Run23-25) data taking. something like
> > "Finally, I plan to shed light on the future data-taking plan for
> > precision and their kinematic coverage of heavy flavor measurements
> > in
> > the STAR experiment."
> >
> > Regards,
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-06-19 13:09, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Barbara Trzeciak (barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com) has submitted a
> > material
> > > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59970
> > >
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