STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Please find my comments below on your nice poster.

It is advised to follow the guidance set by IUPAC while using symbols in 
scientific text:
https://iupac.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/01/ICTNS-On-the-use-of-italic-and-roman-fonts-for-symbols-in-scientific-text.pdf
Note: 
it should be written as $p$+$p$ and $p$+Au, etc, which is different from 
the guidance. 

For example:
pT,jet -> $p_{\rm T,jet}$ (here p represents momentum and it has value 
so is italic; whereas "T,jet" is a label and no value so "roman")
Similarly please correct for z_g -> $z_{\rm g}$ and R_g -> $R_{\rm g}$
Detailed can be found in the above link.

In Abstract:
"…(Rg) and the QCD splitting…" -> "…(Rg), and the QCD splitting…"
"…second and third splits…" -> …second, and third splits…"

In Motivation:
_ Please make sure there is no extra space between words; may be due to 
alignment.
_"…experimentally robust observables" -> "… robust observables." 
(Observables are measured experimentally)
_ "Two ways how to study the parton shower: " - > "Two ways to study the 
parton shower:"

In SoftDrop:
_Please use two bullets for "Grooming…" and "Connects…"
_Define  z_cut, pT,1,2, theta and beta
_Introduce and define R_g here

Correlation between observes at the first split:
_Please use bullets for each items
_Define pT,jet

First, second, and third split:
_You need to introduce or show a cartoon to explain what are these 
First, second, and third splits are
_Please use bullets for each items

Conclusion:
_Please use bullets for each items
_"Selecting on the split number as we move along the jet shower mimics 
the same observation selecting on Rg at the first split"
-> can you please paraphrase this sentence? Not clear.


Regards,
Nihar



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