STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Rachael,

nice abstract. Please see my comments below.

- J/\Psi -> J/\psi

- Title: your measurement is at 510 not 200 GeV, right ?

- " In this measurement, the J/Ψ pT spectra and yield as a function of multiplicity are measured in proton-proton collisions at √ s = 510 GeV via the dilepton decay channels." - it sounds as if we were going to present the final physical results on this. I propose to rephrase it, since you're going to show only initial steps as you write later, e.g.:

The aim of this analysis is to measure the J/psi pT spectra and ..... via the dilepton decay channel. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Jun 24, 2022 at 10:29 PM Rachael Botsford via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Thank you for the suggestions, I've made the changes and uploaded a new draft.

Thanks,

Rachael

On Thu, Jun 23, 2022 at 11:59 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Rachael,

We note that you have requested for hp-pwg presentation next week, so
please prepare for that.
Due to limited time we can go ahead with this abstract without a
showstopper.
We will decide the result/plots be shown at DNP later.

Please find my comments on your nice abstract below.

1_ Title:
"Toward a …Channel" -> "Toward a …Channel in $p$+$p$ collisions at
$\sqrt s $ = 200 GeV in the STAR experiment"

2_ "Rachael Botsford" -> "Rachael Botsford (for the STAR collaboration)"

3_ "with their own anti-quarks…" -> "with their anti-quarks…"

4_ "This analysis will measure J/Ψ pT spectra and yield as a function of
multiplicity in proton-proton …"
->
"In this measurement, the J/Ψ pT spectra and yield as a function of
multiplicity are measured in proton-proton …"

5_ As "TPC", "TOF", and "BEMC" are not used in the next sentences, so
you can drop those abbreviations.

6_ "…including J/Ψ invariant mass plots and plots related to electron
and muon identification in the STAR detector." -> "... including J/Ψ
invariant mass distributions and the methods for electron and muon
identification using the STAR detector."


Regards,
Nihar

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