STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Hao,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
with this implemented, I sign off.

Line5: "…it involves both perturbative and non-perturbative processes." 
-> "…it involves both the perturbative and non-perturbative 
Quantum-Chromodyamics processes.
Line7: "…activities (the number of jets per event) due to…" -> 
"…activities, i.e., the number of jets per event, due to…"
Line8:"Therefore, studies associated with jets can…" -> "Therefore, the 
study of J/shi production with respect to jet activity can …"
Line10:"the first results from RHIC of the J/ψ production cross section 
as a function of jet activity using the p+p collision data at √s = 200 
GeV collected by the STAR experiment in 2015."
" -> "the first measurement of the J/ψ production cross section as a 
function of jet activity using the p+p collision at √s = 200 GeV data 
collected by the STAR experiment in 2015 at RHIC."


Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-06-24 11:10, Hao Huang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Convenors and All,
>
> Please find my abstract for DNP 2022 in the link above,
> which is similar to the approved abstract for QM 2022.
>
> Best,
> Hao
>
> webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> 於
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