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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tanmay,

please see my comments below:

L5, 10: pp -> $pp$

L8: at RHIC energies -> at RHIC

L8: add in which system and energy

L14: "This talk provides a status update" - could you please be more specific here ? For my understanding, do you plan to have new preliminaries, what kind of updates should we expect ?

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Jun 27, 2022 at 8:37 AM tpani via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi,

I have implemented the latest comments and uploaded the latest version
here:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Tanmay_DNP_Abs_2022_v4.pdf

Thanks,

Tanmay
On 2022-06-26 23:06, Yi Yang wrote:
> Hi Tanmay,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I just have a very minor comment
> for your consideration.
>  L10:  "PYTHIA 8 pp events" reads a bit strange to me, how about
> "Monte Carlo simulated events in pp collisions from PYTHIA 8"
>
> Look forward to hearing the update from you.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Mon, Jun 27, 2022 at 3:36 AM tpani via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hi Sooraj and Nihar,
>>
>> Thank you for your comments, I will be presenting the updates from
>> this
>> analysis in an upcoming hard probes meeting before DNP. I have made
>> the
>> implemented the suggestions from Sooraj and uploaded the new version
>>
>> here:
>>
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Tanmay_DNP_Abs_2022_v3.pdf
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Tanmay
>> On 2022-06-26 12:02, Nihar Sahoo wrote:
>>> Hello Tanmay,
>>>
>>> I find the content of this abstract is the same as your previous
>> DNP
>>> 2021 talk; we look forward to seeing the updates in this
>> direction.
>>> I have no further comments; I sign off.
>>>
>>> Cheers
>>> Nihar
>>>
>>>
>>> On 2022-06-26 10:49, Sooraj Radhakrishnan via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>> Hi Tanmay,
>>>> Thanks for preparing this nice abstract. I have only a few
>>>> comments. I sign off with them implements
>>>>
>>>> You can remove Mentor name in the author part
>>>> L2: remove early in a collision
>>>> L7: You could remove sentence starting 'They allow us ... '. Its
>>>> repeating what already said
>>>>
>>>> thanks
>>>> Sooraj
>>>>
>>>> On Sun, Jun 26, 2022 at 4:05 AM tpani via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> Please find the abstract for my contribution to DNP 2022 in the
>> link
>>>>>
>>>>> above. I look forward to your comments.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>
>>>>> Tanmay
>>>>> On 2022-06-25 18:30, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Tanmay Pani (tp543 AT physics.rutgers.edu) has submitted a
>> material
>>>>> for a
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