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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Derek,

Sorry for the late reply and thanks a lot for the nice slide. 

Since it is the same as QM22, I only have some very minor comments and questions for your consideration. 

  Just for my own education: 

      - p7, about the TPS definition, what does r^1.5 mean? Why not r^2?  

              How do you know the yellow regions in the plots are 95% pure pi0 and the green regions correspond to photons? 

 - p10: move "steps" to the previous line

 - p12: Why didn't you use the STAR tune? (I believe it has been discussed, so just for my own education)

 - p17: What does "p+p style different" mean? 

 - p18: Probably it is good to indicate the PYTHIA tune here as well. 

            What does "smeared PYTHIA-8" mean? 

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Thu, Jun 30, 2022 at 11:09 AM Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for the feedback! I've implemented your suggestions in the link below!

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonTalk_ICHEP2022.v2_0.pdf

 -- Derek

On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 9:50 AM Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Derek, Just minor comments from my side, and I sign off your nice talk. - Title: "200 GeV" should be in one line - s5: add I_AA definition - s7: at the bottom: Small TSP Values -> Small TSP Values: Pi0 Large TSP Values ->

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Hi Derek,

Just minor comments from my side, and I sign off your nice talk.

- Title: "200 GeV" should be in one line

- s5: add I_AA definition

- s7: at the bottom: Small TSP Values -> Small TSP Values: Pi0

Large TSP Values -> Large TSP Values: \gamma_rich

- s13: you show the comparison to Pythia on the next slide, I would remove related bullets from this slide.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 6:14 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Derek,

I sign off your talk.

Enjoy the conference.
Nihar

On 2022-06-28 01:18, Derek Anderson wrote:
> Hi Nihar and Sooraj,
>
> Thanks for the feedback! I've implemented your suggestions in the link
> below, and included a response below!
>
>> On the title slide, whats the 6 on top right?
> It's part of the conference dates: the conference runs from July 6th
> to the 13th!
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AndersonTalk_ICHEP2022.v1_manualAnimations_0.pdf
>
>  -- Derek
>
> On Mon, Jun 27, 2022 at 5:44 AM Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hi Derek, Your presentation is same as from QM 2022. I sign off
>> with a couple of minor comments On the title slide, whats the 6 on
>> top right? S2: hard partons are produced in early stages of
>> collisions, but not jets as such. May be change to
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>> Your presentation is same as from QM 2022. I sign off with a
>> couple of minor comments
>>
>> On the title slide, whats the 6 on top right?
>> S2: hard partons are produced in early stages of collisions, but not
>> jets as such. May be change to hard partons produced in early ...
>>
>> thanks
>> Sooraj
>>
>> On Mon, Jun 27, 2022 at 8:26 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
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>>> Hello Derek,
>>>
>>> Your slides look good.
>>> As the content and format of your talk are the same with QM2022,
>>> hence I
>>> have only a few comments on Slide#2.
>>>
>>> Slide#2:
>>> "Heavy-ion collisions produce a hot, dense medium consistent with
>>> QGP"
>>> -> "Heavy-ion collisions produce a hot and dense QCD medium known
>>> as
>>> Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP)"
>>>
>>> "Jets: collimated sprays of hadrons from the fragmentation of
>>> partons"
>>> -> "Jets: collimated sprays of hadrons from the fragmentation of
>>> energetic partons produced from high-Q^2 process"
>>>
>>> “flavor”of jet,etc. ->  color factor of parton, etc.
>>> (Flavor of jet is a bit confusing as flavor of
>>> quark in
>>> QCD is meaningful; but here you mean quark vs gluon color factor)
>>>
>>> cheers
>>> Nihar
>>>
>>> On 2022-06-25 06:41, Derek Anderson via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> Please find my slides for ICHEP in the previous message. They're
>>>> largely identical to what we showed at QM, the only real changes
>>> being
>>>> minor visual changes and an additional slide on jets and the QGP
>>> since
>>>> this is a more general conference. Any comments or suggestions
>>> are
>>>> more than welcome!
>>>>
>>>> -- Derekat
>>>>
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