STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tristan (and Rosi),

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some minor comments/suggestions for your consideration. 

  - Title: should we mention it is in heavy-ion collisions, like "Measurement of Jet Anisotropy in heavy-ion collisions at STAR". I would naively think that this result probably can not directly apply to the p+p collisions? 

 - L6: in nucleons. --> in nucleons, known as the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP).   (Since you use QGP in L8, it would be better the mention it here.) 

  - L7: produces --> produce

  - L11: to measuring jet --> to measure jet 

  - L16: track jets --> charged jets  (?)

  

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Jul 19, 2022 at 10:22 PM Rosi Reed via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi All,

This is for Tristan Protzman, he is in the phonebook but didn't pop up on drupal, we'll figure it out.  In the meantime, I submitted his abstract so we can stay on time.

Regards,

Rosi

On Tue, Jul 19, 2022 at 10:17 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Rosi Reed (rjr215 AT lehigh.edu) has submitted a material for a review, please 
have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60336

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