STAR HardProbes PWG

[zli1 <zli1 AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Nihar,

Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version, please have a 
look.
For Line1-2, I would like to briefly introduce equivalent photon 
approximation and then go to photon-induced interactions.

Best,
Ziyang

On 2022-07-24 16:41, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hello Ziyang,
>
> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>
>
> Line1-2: "The strong electromagnetic field generated by the colliding
> nuclei in heavy-ion collisions can be represented by a spectrum of
> photons, "
>  Not sure what exactly you want to say here. Can you please elaborate 
> this?
>
> Please mention what is that "very low transverse momentum" ?
>
> $p_{T}$ -> $p_{\rm T}$ [ as T is a lable (roman) where p represents
> momentum and it has a value hence italic]
>
> very-low-pT -> very low pT [other places]
>
> invariant mass, pT^2 and angular -> invariant mass, pT^2, and angular
>
>
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
>
> On 2022-07-24 13:56, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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> > Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a 
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> > please have a look:
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