STAR HardProbes PWG

[Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu>]

Hi Barbara and Nihar,

Thanks for the suggestions! I will respond to the comments and update a new version of slides by tomorrow. Nihar, since you suggest that I show the uncertainty plot as a preliminary figure, I remade it and attached it to this email. Please let me know if you have any comments for this figure.

Best,

Youqi

On Sun, Oct 2, 2022 at 10:17 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Youqi,

Please find my comments on your nice presentation slides!

Slide4-5:
"Jet substructure measurements tell us …" -> "Jet substructure
measurements can tell us …"
(It can tell us something related to frag. and hadronization, but not
definitely)

Slide8:
_Iterative Bayesian Unfolding (please give reference)
_"but this is this is the …" -> "but this is the …"

Slide9:
_"Data" -> can you please mention what data that is? Do you mean this is
pp200 Gev run12 data?
_ Please give some information about this "data"?
_This slide appears abruptly after slide8, can you please introduce some
information here?
Slide10-11:
All these expressions for Qj, M, zg, Rg, need to one slide discussion
before showing the results. (Expressions are in small text size, will
not be visible for audiences)
Can you please add one slide before slide9-10?

Slide12:
Can you say something about this weights? Like where and how do you get
this?

Slide18-19:
There are two small plots, not visible at all.
Can you please make it bigger and clear, and mention how it is related
to your neural network technique?

Slide24,25,26:
_mention which year pp data?
_R=0.4 -> jet resolution parameter (R)=0.4
_There are three different eta, (TPC, BEMC, and jet eta); make it clear
_ M>1 GeV/c^2 -> Do you use the same cut for unfolding while training
simulated from the real data? Or while making response matrix.

Slide27,
_ I recall, we had a discussion earlier that we need systematic
uncertainty along with your statistical uncertainty for these plots in
order to validate this closure. Any progress in that direction.
_"…centered at the value for 3 iterations " -> Not clear, can you please
rephrase this and explain a bit more? I think you have put the
statistical bar only in the case of 3rd iteration results. Is that
correct? If yes, then mention that stat. Error for other iterations are
the same.
_"embedding jets into 2 statistically independent samples " -> what are
those 2 statistical ind. samples? Need some explanation.
_ For your jet pT case, there is a difference at some bins, I think if
you use your systematic uncertainties then it would be consistent. Any
comment?

Slide28:
_This slide needs to come after Slide30-31
_"Tracking uncertainty " -> "Uncertainty in tracking efficiency" 
(people may ask you why only -4% not +4%)
_I think it is important to show right plot with "STAR preliminary".

Slide29:
_Remove "Preliminary results:" ; "Fully corrected jet M" make it bigger.
_"... but MultiFold also gives us something else!" I think you can drop
this and clearly mention what is that "something else"
_Be prepared for it if somebody ask any comment on systematic
uncertainty comparison between two unfolding methods. Can you please
mention here what would be your answer?
_ Jet M _expression_ make it bigger; Or just remove it if you add one
slide as I commented before.
_ I like this plot now.

Slide30-31:
_Remove "Preliminary results:" ;
_You could move these slides before slide29 where you can discuss one
projection results of jet M.
_"Wider jets tend to have lower |Q|" -> how do you get this conclusion?
_ "Different fragmentation patter" -> do you mean it is because of their
different jet Mass?

Slide33:
_"apply boosted decision trees on fully corrected data... " -> what is
"boosted decision tree"?
_ remover "…" at the end. Or say something what is your plan?

Cheers
Nihar

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