STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Nihar,

I have minor comments on your nice abstract.

- L6: "by STAR" - I would move to the end of the sentence.

- L13:  Comparison of these results - it might be not clear comparison of which results you mean. You mean comparison of gamma-jet and pi0-jet results, comparison between p+p and Au+Au ? I would state it clearly here. 

-L19: I would remove "using one set of data."

Cheers,

Barbara

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