STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac,

this event shape dependent jet RAA measurement in Isobar would be indeed 
interesting and can draw attention in HP2023.
If you have any update or first result in this direction, please bring 
that to upcoming HP-pwg for discussion as soon as possible.

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

Title: "Nuclear modification …" of what? Please mention either "jet" 
or/and "inclusive charged hadron" pT spectra, etc.
L8: "The  modification of the resulting partons with high transverse 
momentum (pT) …" -> "The  modification of the parton shower with a high 
virtuality in heavy-ion collisions compared to its vacuum…" 
("Modification" occurs to jet or jet shape or parton shower. )

L15: "to study system size dependence " -> "	to study the system size 
dependence ";
     "	of nuclear modification. " -> Here it is not clear "Nuclear 
modification of " what? Is this for Jet or inclusive hadron pt, etc?

L20-25: These sentences can be concisely written into one/two sentences. 
Please try to rephrase that.
On the other hand, please include  information how we plan to select 
jet, and some analysis information like jet R, kinematic range of jet 
pT, etc.
These are missing in this abstract to make it attractive for HP2023.

Cheers
Nihar





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