STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Andrew,

Thank you for implementing my comments.
I have a few additional comments below.

L6: "Other time information" Not clear what is other time besides "split 
formation time" ?
L23: "The response of the EEC to selections on jet pT …. 15 GeV/c to 50 
GeV/c" ->" The EEC of full jet pT will be shown in a kinematic range  
from 15 to 50 GeV/$\it c$ using the STAR barrel calorimeter detectors 
and time projection chamber. "
L25: "… PYTHIA 6, a Monte Carlo event generator." -> "… PYTHIA-6."  (If 
it is STAR tune, then mention it please)


Cheers
Nihar






On 2022-11-29 01:14, Andrew Tamis wrote:
> Hello Barbara and Nihar
>
> Thank you for the comments!  I have implemented both of your
> suggestions.  I included split formation time as an example of time
> information that soft drop and the lund plane extract.  I have also
> listed PYTHIA 6 as the monte carlo generator I am using for
> comparisons.
>
> Please let me know if you have any more comments
>
> Best,
> Andrew
>
> On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 6:07 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Andrew,
> >
> > Please find my comment on your nice abstract.
> >
> > L6: "extract time information " -> please mention what time
> > information.
> > Do you mean "formation time of parton shower" ?
> > L12:"…  jet evolution .." -> the jet evolution
> > L14: "infrared and collinear " -> "infrared-and-collinear "
> > L21: "data from" -> "the data from";  "in p+p collisions"
> > L22: for the detector effect;
> > "a Monte Carlo event generator " -> better to mention what are
> > those
> > generators or models?
> >
> > Please give some information how do you select jet in pp and what
> > kinematic range you plan to present.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-11-21 10:58, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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> > >
> > > Andrew Tamis (andrew.tamis AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for
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