STAR HardProbes PWG

[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Brennan,

   Please find a few comments from me to your nice abstract

Title: p+p collisions at

L2: p+p collisions at ... GeV with STAR

L4: Remove 'is found'

Do you want to add a statement on the higher statistics or pT reach compared to the 200 GeV measurements?

thanks

Sooraj

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 7:39 AM Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Brennan,

nice abstract, please find my comment below.

- dielectron channel -> dielectron decay channel

- a faster-than-linear rise is found - remove "is found"

- do you plan to show Pythia and other predictions ? I think it would be useful, and you could then add it to the abstract. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 12:48 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Brennan,

I have a minot comment on your nice abstract. I sign off.

Title:
"production at sqrt(s) = 500" -> production in p+p collisions at sqrt(s)
= 500 Gev"


Cheers
Nihar


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Department of Physics

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