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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Isaac,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

  - Title: I would suggest to change it from "Nuclear modification" to "Nuclear modification factor for inclusive hadron"  

  - L21: jets which --> sprays of hadrons (jets) which  

Cheers,

Yi  

 

  

 

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 5:50 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Isaac,

this event shape dependent jet RAA measurement in Isobar would be indeed
interesting and can draw attention in HP2023.
If you have any update or first result in this direction, please bring
that to upcoming HP-pwg for discussion as soon as possible.

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

Title: "Nuclear modification …" of what? Please mention either "jet"
or/and "inclusive charged hadron" pT spectra, etc.
L8: "The  modification of the resulting partons with high transverse
momentum (pT) …" -> "The  modification of the parton shower with a high
virtuality in heavy-ion collisions compared to its vacuum…"
("Modification" occurs to jet or jet shape or parton shower. )

L15: "to study system size dependence " -> "    to study the system size
dependence ";
      " of nuclear modification. " -> Here it is not clear "Nuclear
modification of " what? Is this for Jet or inclusive hadron pt, etc?

L20-25: These sentences can be concisely written into one/two sentences.
Please try to rephrase that.
On the other hand, please include  information how we plan to select
jet, and some analysis information like jet R, kinematic range of jet
pT, etc.
These are missing in this abstract to make it attractive for HP2023.

Cheers
Nihar





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