STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Isaac,

I don’t have any further comments.

Cheers,

Yi 

Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>於 2022年12月1日 週四，下午5:53寫道：

Hi Issac,

I don't have any comments on your nice abstract.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-12-01 02:08, Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi conveners,
>
> Thanks for your comments. I’ve implemented most of them in v3 now on
> the node. Please see my responses to some comments in-line below.
>
> Thanks again,
> Isaac
>
>> On Nov 29, 2022, at 8:55 PM, Sooraj Radhakrishnan via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Issac,
>> Thanks for preparing this nice abstract. Please find a few
>> comments from me below
>>
>> Title: Measurement of (path length dependent?) nuclear ...by STAR
>> L7: plasma (QGP)
>> L7: other abstracts are using A+A and p+p, could change to that
>> L10: with QGP
>> L11 scaled (by the number of binary nucleon-nucleon collisions)
>> L13: high statistics isobar data
>> L14: Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru
>> L17: differentially with system size - what do you mean here? The
>> Npart dependence? That you can do in Au+Au too. Better to be clear
>> what is meant
>> L18: will present results using event shape engineering which can be
>> used to control the path length of the partons through the medium
>  >> I prefer the structure that was there before. Partly this is
> because it moderates the expectation for a completely polished ESE
> measurement to be presented.
>
>> L21: traveled --> traversed
>  >> In the context of this sentence, I think it should be traveled,
> since traversed shouldn’t have a preposition afterward, and “event
> plane direction” requires a preposition. E.g. “along” the event
> plane direction. But I’m no grammar expert.
>
>> L21: event plane direction
>> L22: traversed perpendicular to it
>  >> See comment about line 21.
>
>> L25: geometry of the system --> path length through the QGP
>  >> I’ve left it at the more vague “geometry of the system”
> since I’m trying to avoid using too much of the same language as
> Tristan’s abstract. I know I use “path length of the partons
> through the medium” one other time out of necessity, but I’d
> prefer to leave it at that.
>
>> thanks
>> Sooraj
>>
>> On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 3:27 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Isaac,
>>
>> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I have some minor comments for
>> your consideration.
>> - Title: I would suggest to change it from "Nuclear modification"
>> to "Nuclear modification factor for inclusive hadron"
>> - L21: jets which --> sprays of hadrons (jets) which
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>>
>> On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 5:50 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> Hello Isaac,
>>
>> this event shape dependent jet RAA measurement in Isobar would be
>> indeed
>> interesting and can draw attention in HP2023.
>> If you have any update or first result in this direction, please
>> bring
>> that to upcoming HP-pwg for discussion as soon as possible.
>>
>> Please find my comment on your nice abstract.
>>
>> Title: "Nuclear modification …" of what? Please mention either
>> "jet"
>> or/and "inclusive charged hadron" pT spectra, etc.
>> L8: "The  modification of the resulting partons with high transverse
>>
>> momentum (pT) …" -> "The  modification of the parton shower with a
>> high
>> virtuality in heavy-ion collisions compared to its vacuum…"
>> ("Modification" occurs to jet or jet shape or parton shower. )
>>
>> L15: "to study system size dependence " -> "    to study the system
>> size
>> dependence ";
>> " of nuclear modification. " -> Here it is not clear "Nuclear
>> modification of " what? Is this for Jet or inclusive hadron pt, etc?
>>
>> L20-25: These sentences can be concisely written into one/two
>> sentences.
>> Please try to rephrase that.
>  >> I’m not sure what you mean here, since there are already two
> sentences. I think it reads okay, but maybe I’m missing something.
>
>> On the other hand, please include  information how we plan to
>> select
>> jet, and some analysis information like jet R, kinematic range of
>> jet
>> pT, etc.
>  >> I think since we’re not planning to emphasize a push to some
> previously not explored jet R or pT range, that it is okay not to
> mention these selection criteria, which I think are a bit too detailed
> for the abstract and may make it too long.
>
>> These are missing in this abstract to make it attractive for
>> HP2023.
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
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