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[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Hi Neil,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - L1: heavy ion -> heavy-ion

 - L9: quenching -> jet quenching 

 - L10: LHC -> the LHC 

 - L16: I would remove "of radius R = 0.4" since I don't think it is that important in the abstract, but it is up to you.

Cheers,

Yi

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