STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yan,

Thank you for your nice comments.
Please find my comments below.

Slide-3:
"Jet quenching" -> Since you are discussing on J/psi so jet quenching 
may not relevant. You could mention "J/psi suppression"

In the top cartoon, what does "Red vertical upward arrow" represent 
there along with "T"?

Slide-4
"All these effects are expected to strongly depend on collision system 
size " -> "All these effects are expected to show strong dependence on 
collision system size"

Slide-6:
Please increase the X,Y-axis title size.

SLide-8:
Sorry, I have not followed this before.
Could you inform me what does "Isobar, 60-80%" represent in RAA plot?


Slide-14:
"Indicate that the color-screening effect is dominant in isobaric 
collisions"
I think you could add this "color-screening effect" in one of Silde8,9;
Although you have mentioned suppression but if you could add 
"Significant suppression observed at large Npart due to color-screening 
effect" (in SLide9) then it would be good to say at the end.


Cheers
Nihar






On 2023-03-17 08:17, wy157543--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Xin Dong,
>
>   Thanks for your comments, I will update the figure later.
> I am sorry for the link issue, the slide can be found in this link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_v2_2.pdf
>
> best,
> Yan
>
>
>
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> > 主题: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Hard Probes 2023 got 
> > commented by Xin Dong
> >
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Xin Dong ( xdong AT lbl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
> > submitted
> > by Yan Wang ( wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn ) at
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Hard-Probes-2023/Jpsi-production-RuRu-and-ZrZr-collisions-200GeV-STAR-experiment
> >
> > Comment:
> > Hi Yan, it looks like the link below doesn't work. But I managed to 
> > access it
> > by changing the filename to "HP_v2_0.pdf" (believe it is the current 
> > draft).
> > I have one suggestion to your nice result in slide 13. I think it 
> > would be
> > better to add the D0 v2 data points together to better illustrate the
> > conclusion you have on the slide "limited regeneration". Thanks /xin
> >
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