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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Priyanka.

I sign off with a few minor comments to be addressed.

General:

- Use consistent size of the bullets, like you have in your Motivation section.

- Use (or not) consistently dots at the end of your sentences.

Abstract

- We will present a study -> We present an ongoing study

Section IV

- Improve quality of the plots. Increase the font of the axis, legend and the text inside the plot. You don't need all the information in the statistical box. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Mar 23, 2023 at 11:47 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Priyanka,

Please upload your updated version to this request: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036

(Don't submit a new request.) 

I don't have any further comments on your v5 except a very minor one: 

  - D0 reconstruction: Distance of Closest Approach, the "d)" is off a bit.

Cheers,

Yi

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National Cheng Kung University
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On Wed, Mar 22, 2023 at 12:43 PM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I have implemented and updated my poster.

Regards,

Priyanka

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Hi Priyanka,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Titiel: Au-Au --> Au+Au

 - Motivation block: 

    - (Fig. 1) --> Fig. 1: Area of homogeneity  

    - Figure 2 has a grey background, is it on purpose? 

    - Remove (fig. 2) 

 - Methodology block:   

    - where, --> where  (two places) 

 - Experiment block: 

    - Plot 1, 2 should be "Fig. 6 (a) and (b) or left and right 

    - PID via combo measurement --> PID via combined measurement  

 - Analysis block:   

    - Plot 3, 4 should be Fig. 7 (a) and (b) or left and right. Also there are strange edges on these plots 

       Do you want to show a plot for pT < 1 GeV to support your point "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal."? 

        Also "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal." --> , and background is dominant over D0 signal for pT < 1 GeV." .

    - Fig 6 --> Fig. 8

    - It is a bit difficult to read the part of "Detector effects corrections", you can try to use bullets. 

    - "We can't predict..."  --> "No prediction on the correlation shape is available so far and it will be the first measurement"    

Cheers,

Yi

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Yi Yang, Professor
Department of Physics / 

Director of Science Education Center

National Cheng Kung University
Tainan, 701 Taiwan
E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw
Tel: +886-6-2757575 ext.65237
Fax: +886-6-2747995
Group Web: http://phys.ncku.edu.tw/~yiyang
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On Tue, Mar 21, 2023 at 3:28 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl) has submitted 
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https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036

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