STAR HardProbes PWG

["Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka

In the interest of time, here are some comments to your poster. 

Let's use this entry (https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036) from now 
on to avoid confusions. Please change the title to be the same as your poster 
title. It is OK that it will be same as the other entry. 

Conveners: please remove https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63021. 

ABSTRACT
- sensitive to the interactions in the final state -> sensitive to final 
state interactions

MOTIVATION
- interpret this distance -> interpret this length
- In Fig. 2, what is the relation of r2 compared to other distances? Why is 
it repulsive while others are attractive? I mean what is special about r2?

METHODOLOGY
- remove "of the pair"
- In Fig. 3, maybe replace r^0 with r* to be consistent with the equation?
- In terms of -> As a function of

D0 RECONSTRUCTION AT STAR
- d) p & decay length -> d) D^0 & PV
- Fig. 6: could you use a high-resolution version of the figure? Please do 
not stretch it. 

ANALYSIS & OUTCOMES
- Fig. 7
-- Resolution seems a bit low
-- This figure seems stretched vertically
-- Add "2014 Au+Au \sqrt{s_NN} = 200 GeV" to the figure. Please also add 
centrality.
-- Caption: k\pi invariant mass distributions in different p_T intervals
- Need to define the invariant mass range used for purity calculation
- Possibility of correlation between D0 candidates and daughters were removed 
-> Possible correlation between D0 candidates and their daughters were removed
- avoid track splitting
- How should the correlation functions look like?

SUMMARY
- make conclusion about -> measure

Best
Rongrong


> On Mar 23, 2023, at 1:07 PM, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Hi Barbara and all,
> 
> Thanks for your comments. Please find my updated poster v6 with the 
> implementation of all suggestions. I have increased the label and axis 
> title size and legend text size as well. I have kept the stat box, if it 
> looks clumsy, please let me know, and I can remove the stat box if required.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP2023_poster_v6.pdf
> 
> Regards,
> Priyanka
> From: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
> Sent: Thursday, March 23, 2023 1:12 PM
> To: Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>; STAR HardProbes PWG 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Cc: Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl>
> Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for 
> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>  
> Hi Priyanka.
> 
> I sign off with a few minor comments to be addressed.
> 
> General:
> - Use consistent size of the bullets, like you have in your Motivation 
> section.
> - Use (or not) consistently dots at the end of your sentences.
> 
> Abstract
> - We will present a study -> We present an ongoing study
> 
> Section IV
> - Improve quality of the plots. Increase the font of the axis, legend and 
> the text inside the plot. You don't need all the information in the 
> statistical box. 
> 
> 
> Cheers,
> Barbara
> 
> On Thu, Mar 23, 2023 at 11:47 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Hi Priyanka,
> 
> Please upload your updated version to this request: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036
> (Don't submit a new request.) 
> 
> I don't have any further comments on your v5 except a very minor one: 
>   - D0 reconstruction: Distance of Closest Approach, the "d)" is off a bit.
> 
> Cheers,
> Yi
> 
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Yi Yang, Professor 
> Department of Physics / 
> Director of Science Education Center
> National Cheng Kung University 
> Tainan, 701 Taiwan 
> E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw 
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> 
> 
> On Wed, Mar 22, 2023 at 12:43 PM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via 
> Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> Hi Yi,
> 
> Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I have implemented and updated my 
> poster.
> 
> Regards,
> Priyanka
> From: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Yi Yang via 
> Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Sent: Wednesday, March 22, 2023 11:00 AM
> To: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>; STAR HardProbes PWG 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury for 
> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>  
> Hi Priyanka,
> 
> Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your 
> consideration. 
>  - Titiel: Au-Au --> Au+Au
>  - Motivation block: 
>     - (Fig. 1) --> Fig. 1: Area of homogeneity  
>     - Figure 2 has a grey background, is it on purpose? 
>     - Remove (fig. 2) 
>  - Methodology block:   
>     - where, --> where  (two places) 
>  - Experiment block: 
>     - Plot 1, 2 should be "Fig. 6 (a) and (b) or left and right 
>     - PID via combo measurement --> PID via combined measurement  
>  - Analysis block:   
>     - Plot 3, 4 should be Fig. 7 (a) and (b) or left and right. Also there 
> are strange edges on these plots 
>        Do you want to show a plot for pT < 1 GeV to support your point "for 
> pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal."? 
>         Also "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal." --> , 
> and background is dominant over D0 signal for pT < 1 GeV." .
>     - Fig 6 --> Fig. 8
>     - It is a bit difficult to read the part of "Detector effects 
> corrections", you can try to use bullets. 
>     - "We can't predict..."  --> "No prediction on the correlation shape is 
> available so far and it will be the first measurement"    
> 
> 
> Cheers,
> Yi
> 
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Yi Yang, Professor 
> Department of Physics / 
> Director of Science Education Center
> National Cheng Kung University 
> Tainan, 701 Taiwan 
> E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw 
> Tel: +886-6-2757575 ext.65237 
> Fax: +886-6-2747995
> Group Web: http://phys.ncku.edu.tw/~yiyang 
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> 
> On Tue, Mar 21, 2023 at 3:28 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> 
> Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl) has 
> submitted  
> a material for a review, please have a look:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036
> 
> Deadline: 2023-03-26
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