STAR HardProbes PWG

["Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac

In the interest of time, here are some comments for you consideration. 

General
- Since you list BNL as one of your affiliations, I suggest to add the BNL 
logo as well.

ABSTRACT
- transfer -> transfers
- to small systems and Au+Au results -> to both small and large collision 
systems

MOTIVATION
- Energy Density of overlap -> Energy density of overlapping

THE STAR EXPERIMENT
- Could you send me this STAR detector figure in high-resolution? I can 
collect it on our central page. Thanks. 

CHARGED HADRON SUPPRESSION IN ISOBAR COLLISIONS
- high p_T tracks -> higher p_T tracks
- Is it mis-binning of centrality or N_coll does not scale with N_hard in 
peripheral events?

CONCLUSIONS
- Hadron yields show -> Hadron suppression shows
- on the system geometry -> on the collision geometry

Best
Rongrong

> On Mar 23, 2023, at 6:10 PM, Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Hi everyone,
> 
> I have addressed all of the helpful comments, in addition to some from the 
> group at Yale, in v1 now on the node. Please let me know if there are any 
> further comments.
> 
> Best,
> Isaac
> 
>> On Mar 23, 2023, at 8:04 AM, Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Isaac,
>> 
>> Nice poster, please see below my minor comments:
>> Abstract:
>> ratio of hadron or jet spectra in A+A and p+p collisions called the -> 
>> ratio of hadron or jet spectra in A+A and p+p collisions scaled by the 
>> number of binary nucleon-nucleon collisions called the
>> In this talk -> In this poster
>> ESE
>> [Done by ALICE; see talk by C. Beattie on 30th] - you can make this 
>> smaller and the full reference seems to be missing
>> → path length dependence of jet energy loss! - you can use bold or some 
>> colour
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>> 
>> On Thu, Mar 23, 2023 at 11:35 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l 
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> Hi Isaac,
>> 
>> No worries and thanks a lot for the nice poster. 
>> I have some minor comments for your consideration. 
>>  - The STAR Experiment: is it possible to rearrange the text and picture, 
>> like to all text at the top (6 lines) and put the STAR in the bottom, and 
>> hope this will make the picture bigger. (Up to you)
>>  - Charged hadron suppression: could you please add a bullet on each item? 
>> Up to you, too. 
>>  - Event shape engineering: I agree with what Rongrong suggested. 
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>> 
>> 
>> On Wed, Mar 22, 2023 at 9:39 AM Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l 
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> Hi all,
>> 
>> I’ve posted a draft of the poster. I sincerely apologize for the delay in 
>> getting this to the list. I will make every effort to make sure it doesn’t 
>> happen again.
>> Note on the final two plots: the 2D histogram is on the full (Ru) dataset; 
>> the v2 plot is the result of a suggestion from the FCV PWG to demonstrate 
>> that q2 has some sensitivity to anisotropy, and I will increase the 
>> statistics used, probably with the next draft I send out. As this is 
>> v2-obs and not the v2 corrected for event plane resolution, it is not a 
>> “physics" plot.
>> For both plots I know there are labels that need to be added, and 
>> beautification to be done, but I will also take care of that in the next 
>> iteration.
>> 
>> Thanks for your consideration,
>> Isaac
>> 
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>> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
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>> > Isaac Mooney (isaac.mooney AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for a 
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