STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Priyanka,

I have a small comment on your interesting slides that you’re free to 
disregard if you disagree with it.
Is slide 17 really necessary? Since you go on to finish with a discussion of 
detector effects and then summarize, but don’t explicitly bring up C(k*) 
again, it seems a bit extraneous. Also visually it’s interesting because more 
than half of it is white space (maybe there’s an animation that doesn’t 
appear in the pdf?) I think if you did want to leave in some discussion about 
the experimental construction of this observable, it would make sense to 
include it at the end of slide 12. In my opinion, this would be a good flow: 
for C(k*) we need theory and experiment — theory should include important 
details in the calculation as you mention, and experimentally we need an 
appropriate working definition of the observable, namely the one currently on 
s. 17. You then get a nice transition to the experimental methods section of 
the talk which begins on the next slide.

Either way, good luck on the talk!
-Isaac

PS “calcinations” -> “calculations” on s. 20.

> On Apr 11, 2023, at 10:16 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> Hello Priyanka,
>
> Thank you for preparing this nice presentation and it looks good to 
> motivate your work.
> Please find my comments on your presentation slides.
>
> Slide1:
> Title - " …Au+Au@200 GeV" -> "…Au+Au \sqrt{s_{\rm NN}} = 200 GeV"
>
> Slide2:
> _ "Suppression of production of D0 meson at " -> " Suppression of D^0 meson 
> at …"
> _ "and significant level of thermalization " -> "and its thermalization"
> _ "Current data does not sufficiently discriminate between models" -> "Need 
> new observables to constrain different models and understand production 
> mechanisms"
> _New observables … -> Drop it, you have mentioned above
>
> Slide5:
> "Coulomb interaction" Is there reason to make it red color? If yes, better 
> to mention here.
>
> SLide7:
> In Title  remove one "from"  (Same for slide8)
>
> Slide10:
> "Overall: data suggest small role of D hadronic re-scattering in heavy-ion 
> collisions" ->Where do you get this conclusion? Please provide the 
> reference. I don't see such statement from ALICE QM22 presentation. I 
> probably missed.
>
> Slide11:
>
> Not for this presentation, but for the future and for your analysis,
> Can you contact these theorists to have similar calculation for your 
> analysis kinematics?
>
> Slide14:
> Remove "Figure 7 : Particle identification using TPC (left) and TOF (right)"
> And make it large text "Particle identification using TPC (left) and TOF 
> (right)"
>
> Slide18:
> "Correction of detector effects" -> I would say "Experimental challenges"
> Because "Self correlation" is not a detector effect.
>
> "No. of hit points / Max no. of hit points > 0.51"  this is too technical.
> You could add a sentence "Additional track selection criteria"
>
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
>
>
>
> On 2023-04-10 14:44, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Dear Convenors,
>> I sincerely apologize for the delay in uploading the slides for
>> review. My talk has been rescheduled to Friday, April 14th. Looking
>> forward to your comments and suggestions.
>> You can find my slides here
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/GHP-2023_v2.pdf [1]
>> Thank you.
>> Regards,
>> Priyanka
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