STAR HardProbes PWG

[zli1 <zli1 AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version.

Best,
Ziyang
On 2023-04-13 15:52, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Ziyang,
>
> very nice poster. Please see below my comments.
>
> - General: improve the quality of the plots. I would also suggest
> increasing the font size.
>
> Introduction:
> - "Evidence of photon interactions ... " - use the same font size as
> for the rest of the text.
> - Dimuon channel measurements provide additional statistics -> Dimuon
> channel measurements complement the previous results from dielectron
> channel
>
> - Add reference to the plots. Move the text that is below to the
> figures to the top.
>
> Muon PID at STAR:
> - "Au+Au ..." text on the 1/beta figure is not well visible, either
> move it or use a different color.
>
> J/psi measurements:
> - "The invariant yield (left) ... " and "The p_T^2 distribution of
> J/psi yield (left) ... " - you can move this text to the figures'
> captions, in this way you will have more space to increase the font
> size in other places.
> - consistent with EPA calculation. [4] -> consistent with EPA
> calculations [4].
>
> μ+μ- continuum measurements:
>
> - "The μ+μ- excess yields as a function of invariant mass (right)"
> and "The p_T^2 distribution of excess yield (left) ... "- same as
> before, you can move this text to the figures' captions, in this way
> you will have more space to increase the font size in other places.
> - as a function of invariant mass (right) ->  as a function of
> invariant mass (left)
> - in peripheral collisions. -> in peripheral collisions (right).
> - delta phi distribution(right) -> delta phi distribution (right), in
> peripheral collisions
> - It would be good to define delta phi
>
> Summary:
> - The data are comparable with the EPA calculations indicating -> The
> EPA calculations can describe the data indicating
> - Provide the experimental confirmation of the EPA predictions and can
> be used to map -> Can be used to map
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 3:03 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Nihar,
> >
> > Sorry for the mistake, and thank you for the help.
> > But I haven't found your comments in this link, did I miss
> > something?
> >
> > Best,
> > Ziyang
> >
> > On 2023-04-12 18:21, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Hello Ziyang,
> > >
> > > I can see two entries for this poster, hence I rejected the
> > following
> > > one.
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
> > >
> > > You will get my comments on the following entry.
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63331
> > >
> > > Cheers
> > > Nihar
> > >
> > > On 2023-04-12 14:11, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > >
> > > > Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > > review,
> > > > please have a look:
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
> > > >
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