STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Robert and Yang,

Please find my 1st version of comments on your nice abstract below.

Line3:  "… by the STAR experiment" -> "… at STAR"
LIne8: "…mid-rapidity, in order to probe the interplay between …" -> 
"…mid-rapidity. These measurements probe the interplay between…" Or 
something similar to break this long statement.
Line7: "…	semi-inclusive  hadron-jet (h+jet) correlations …" (for later 
use)
LIne12: The semi-inclusive jet… -> The semi-inclusive h+jet …
Line13: "to remove uncorrelated combinatorial background." -> "to 
mitigate uncorrelated background in present heavy-ion collisions."
Line13-14: "The reported distributions are fully corrected for any 
remaining background fluctuations and detector effects using unfolding 
techniques." -> "The reported jet distributions are fully corrected for 
the heavy-ion background fluctuations and the detector effects using the 
unfolding techniques.
Line16-20:" The high…with the charged particle jets." -> "The inclusive 
full jet reconstruction is carried out up to jet $p_{T,jet}$ ~ 50 GeV/c 
with resolution parameter R=0.2-0.4 using Au+Au collisions data taken in 
2014. This extends the kinematic range significantly compared with the 
previous charged particle jet measurement."
[high-statiscs no needed to mention here; BEMC trigger selection not 
needed in this abstract, already  a lot of info]
L20-21: "…in p+p collisions, and the medium-induced …" -> "…in p+p 
collisions." [Discussion on medium induced modification can be combined 
with h_jet next]
L21-22:"Utilizing the large-statistics isobar dataset, …" -> In 
addition, the suppression of recoil charged jets yield in central to 
peripheral isobar collisions are discussed with charged hadron trigger 
pT between 7 to 25 GeV/c and R=0.2-0.5."
L24-26: As per Yang's last QM status discussion, there was no mention of 
jet acoplanarity measurement. If that is the case, please drop this 
sentence.

Include one sentence before L24. "The medium-induced modification of the 
inclusive jet in central Au+Au collisions and semi-inclusive h+jet in 
central isobar collisions are discussed."

L27-28: "…jet quenching effects …" -> "…jet-medium interaction…"


Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-04-17 20:26, Robert Líčeník via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi HP,
>
> this is the combined abstract for our inclusive jet analysis and
> Yang's semi-inclusive hadron+jet analysis as requested by the PWG.
> Since both Yang and myself have expressed interest in giving the talk,
> I put both our names on the abstract until this is resolved.
> As always, any suggestions are welcome.
>
> Thanks,
> Robert
>
> On Mon, Apr 17, 2023 at 4:52 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Robert Licenik (licenik AT ujf.cas.cz) has submitted a material for a
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> > please have a look:
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